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作者: 笔为剑    时间: 08-11-15 11:27
标题: 在线讨论:ENGLISH WRITING
离考试越来越近了,锻炼大家的思维速度就越来越重要。所以,我会不定期地发起一些在线讨论。
今天的内容是:写一篇主题为friendship的英语作文。
写出提纲就可以了,必须用英文写,有考元奖励!(用中文写者不给奖励)
回复截止时间:今天晚上23点。
作者: nvzhan    时间: 08-11-15 15:16
英语太差了,中午憋了1个小时才写出这么一点,抛砖引玉,同时也希望大家多多纠正

\"no brother no basketball\"  the phrase in NBA tell  something about  the relation between us  and other people when we play basketball.  we can also read the deeper meaning beyond the phrase : people  who live in the society needs  friends,and the friendship  would enable people   more opportunity  to feel  happiness.

living  in  the  society makes us  have to contact  with  other people everyday.working in a company , for  example,  you  have  relation with accompaniers. but not all relations between you and others can be called friendship.we defined friendship as the relation between you and other people who you see them as your brother , your sister.facing problems ,you and your friends  will help each other. when you make mistakes , they would remind you, making you to rectify the mistakes.  the friendship will do more helpful for your progess.
作者: 蓝希    时间: 08-11-15 18:55
Mention the friendship,which the common expressions around us,also  as important as possible.
     when we confront the disaster , for exemple ,\"5.12\" earthquake in sichuan ,everybody in the world bound together like brother or sister  , save the surviver as soon as they heard the news. I was affected the affair. Someone who are in the darkwant to turn the corner but they can not make it respectly and in turn they want to find the escape.
      Judging from what we have been argued above , people need friend and make friend with each other is necessary .
作者: 用想象飞翔    时间: 08-11-15 20:37
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作者: 一盏心灯q    时间: 08-11-15 22:01
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