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标题: 09年战场上我的英语大作文模式 [打印本页]

作者: mzqkaoyan    时间: 09-4-23 14:53
标题: 09年战场上我的英语大作文模式
    考研成败在英语,而阅读40,作文30,这两个就70了,可见其重要性!下面就大作文我谈谈在09年考研战场上的一些感受和我的应对策略,希望对大家有帮助!

    英语试卷,3个小时,作文最后一项。平时单练作文不觉得什么,但真正到考场后,当你真做到作文时,你已经“精疲力竭”了,当时我是头也昏,脑也涨,手也麻了!所以,你不可能像开考那样精神饱满的去写作文,即使你有水平,在那种场合下,你最多也只能发挥60%。所以,如果那时你还去自己写,肯定不会太好!那么怎么办呢?答案就是模版!这其实大家都知道,但关键是什么样的模版!!!不少人用王若平的《万能作文》,确实不错,但我说了,平时练习你不觉得什么,但真到考场之后做到最后一项,你会很累的。《万能作文》一本书都是模版,在那种情况下,你还样想用什么文体的模版,它在哪一页上,内容是什么。其实本来做完阅读和翻译已够累的了,你还要思考这些问题,时间和精力一般人都来不了的!而且你敢保证你套的那个模版就一定合适、能得高分吗?!所以,我认为光背模版是不明智的,还要更好的捷径!

    为了对付09年的考研英语大作文,我结合王若平的《万能作文》和张锦芯的《真题名家详解》中的经典句型赏析与背诵部分以及写作三大高分句式(短句拉长、插入语、并列结构)自己编写了一个能够应付一切漫画作文的模版,并且成功运用于09年考研英语大作文,成绩下来后我估算了一下,大作文应该在17、18分左右!它的好处就是写到你头昏的时候,见到大作文就直接套,一点都不用想,并且可以边写边看漫画思考,节省了大量时间和精力!

下面,我就将此模版献给大家,希望对大家2010年考研有用!

首段:
This is an interesting and thought-provoking picture. As is vividly depicted in the picture, 描述图片表面内容(现象)。Simply designed as it is, the symbolic meaning that the picture conveys is deep and profound. The drawer of the picture might want to tell us that 描述图片的隐含内容(本质)。To illustrate and back up my viewpoint, I would like to take 举例(人或物或其它),解释一下你所说的人或物(插入语,得高分用的),for an example

中段:
自己写一些论据及(生活)实例

末段:
Therefore, building up a/an 观点、精神 towards …… is of great significance both to …… , because only in this way, 倒装句1 and only in this way, 倒装句2.
(说明:最后虽然是一个自然段,但实际上就是一个很长的句子!这样符合短句拉长得高分的原则!而且用到了倒装,只要没有语法错误,一定会给老师留下很好的结尾印象!)

下面我就用此模版将我09年的考研英语作文用此模版套一遍!(带下划线的为需要修改的地方,其它是不要变的模版,下同)
This is an interesting and thought-provoking picture. As is vividly depicted in the picture,around sit a lot of people and all of them are addicted into computers without paying attention to others. Simply designed as it is, the symbolic meaning that the picture conveys is deep and profound. The drawer of the picture might want to tell us that the network seems to make us get near and near with each other but in fact, it gets us to become far away from each other. To illustrate and back up my viewpoint, I would like to take a case, which I met and felt in my life a few months ago,for an example.

中段主要举个例子叙述下就OK啦!

Therefore, building up a correct attitude towards the network is of great significance both to our friends and to ourselves, because only in this way, can we use the network correctly and properly and only in this way, will the correct attitude lead to harmonious intercourse and long-term friendship among people.

其实,作文准备在精不在多,下面,我就将此模版再运用于其它的几个话题,大家看看:

1、杜丽夺金
可以涉及到的漫画内容:
自信(07年作文)、(正确的)偶像崇拜(06年作文)、积极进取的精神、拼搏精神、民族精神(折射)
注:如果你写团体赛例如郭晶晶、吴敏霞北京奥运会夺冠就可以运用于08年作文(团结协作、勇往直前的合作精神)

首段:
This is an interesting and thought-provoking picture. As is vividly depicted in the picture,……. Simply designed as it is, the symbolic meaning that the picture conveys is deep and profound. The drawer of the picture might want to tell us that ……. To illustrate and back up my viewpoint, I would like to take Duli,the owner of 19th Gold Medal in China,for an example.

中段可用句子(短语):
(1) It means much more to her who is under great pressure than to us who are in much comforts.
(2) When confronted with fierce competition, she nanaged to employ her knowledge, skills and experience to confront with her rivals.

末段:
Therefore, building up a combatant spirit towards difficulties and frustrations is of great significance both to a nation and to a country, because only in this way, can we difeat these difficulties and frustrations and only in this way, will the spirit lead to lasting success and prosperity of our deeds and undertakings.

2、北京奥运:
可以涉及到的漫画内容:
世界交往、和谐世界(和谐社会)、国家民族、奥运、体育

首段:
This is an interesting and thought-provoking picture. As is vividly depicted in the picture,……. Simply designed as it is, the symbolic meaning that the picture conveys is deep and profound. The drawer of the picture might want to tell us that ……. To illustrate and back up my viewpoint, I would like to take the Beijing Olympics, the century dream of our Chinese people, for an example.

中段可用句子(短语):
(1) to appreciate the rich cultural deposits of China and employ the environment of Beijing, clean, tidy and with good circulation of air.
(2) We should put forward talents exchange, attach importance to cultivating talents and prvent and avoid brain drain.

末段(由北京奥运到和谐世界)
Therefore, building up a harmonious attitude towards the world is of great significance both to a nation and to an individual, because only in this way, can we live a vigorous, colorful and dynamic life and only in this way, will harmony lead to lasting peace and prosperity of the world.

3、汶川地震
可以涉及到的漫画内容:
民族精神、民族活力、正确价值观(可举例谭千秋等)

首段:
This is an interesting and thought-provoking picture. As is vividly depicted in the picture,……. Simply designed as it is, the symbolic meaning that the picture conveys is deep and profound. The drawer of the picture might want to tell us that ……. To illustrate and back up my viewpoint, I would like to take Tan Qianqiu, a great teacher in China, for an example.

中段可用句子
再大的灾难除以13亿都会变得微不足道;再小的善心乘以13亿都会变成爱的海洋。

——温总理

(同学们可以找老师用最佳的方式翻译!)

末段
Therefore, building up an indomitable spirit is of great significance both to a nation and to an individual, because only in this way, can we defeat tremendous disasters and gigantic frustrations and only in this way, will the spirit lead to lasting success and prosperity of our country and nation.

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