标题: 请大家帮我看看，一篇关于广告的作文 [打印本页] 作者: s03211076 时间: 08-12-23 17:29 标题: 请大家帮我看看，一篇关于广告的作文 Advertisement is closely related to us and it enjoys a striking popularity among us .As can be seen from the picture ,the whole family are watching TV, in which at intervals an advertisement is broadcasting .
It is conspicuously indicated that advertisement plays a crucial role in our daily life .It is in the interest of business man and linked as a bridge between consumers and manufacturers .Just as every coin has two sides ,advertisement is no exception .It has both advantages and disadvantages.For one thing ,excellent advertisement can bring enormous benefits to consumers ,which increasingly stimulates consuming demand and economic growth .For another ,when affected by distaste advertisement ,you buy a fake commodity .It will definitely have a devastating effect on you,to be more serious,threatening to your life .
As far as I am concerned,I tend to be in favor of the positive effects.Nothing is more important than convenience for people living in the quick-paced society.I believe then the negative effects will be minimized through sustainable economic growths and education .作者: s03211076 时间: 08-12-23 17:37 标题: 把作文题发给大家 见附件作者: s03211076 时间: 08-12-23 18:44
写得不好，恳请大家提宝贵意见，以便下次写得更好作者: 冬天好 时间: 08-12-23 19:00
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还是要请大家多提意见，提得越苛刻越好，这样才能鞭策我改正不足作者: 范老师 时间: 08-12-23 23:39
仔细阅读了一遍，写得不错，用到了很多搭配，照我的水平，实在没地方可以挑毛病的哈