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本文是本人对于2008年考研英语大作文的个人写法,其中参考了商志的万能作文某些段落,可能其中有语病之类的,大家可以自己修改。
So interesting and instructive is this drawing that whoever in front of it can’t help seeing again.As can be seen from the picture,(表象描述图片内容) however , (更深一步描述)。Simple as the image is ,the implications mirrored are apparently far-reaching.Indeed, it implies a
Thought-provoking phenomenon/significant philosophic theory :(主旨,比如2008年的:cooperation,nothing is impossible。)
Nowadays,we can learn that such cases are far from being rare and can be found around the world. For instance, De Yaping/Li Ning, the internationally famous athlete,(如考人生哲理,比如合作,自信,终点又是新起点等,这样的例子比较多,也容易写,若考的是讽刺性文章,则需要作者重新举例)This example is far from the only incident of such idea in action .It is hard to imagine what our society/future would be like years later if this pervasive trend goes unchallenged/we always ```````````。
Judging from all arugment offered above ,we may safely arrive at
the conclusion that such phenomenon were terminated or at least reduced. There’s an array of effective measures to tackling this problem. On the one hand, a secial education system should be entailed by all parties concerned to educate/promote citizens’awareness of (如 importance of cooperation ) On the other hand , our government should set up relevant rules and regulations to prevent (••) from (••)。Only when such happenings come to an end ,can we maintain a happy,healthy and harmonious society.
再次申明,此章解释权归本人所有,本人绝不负他人应用之后其后果。
注意问题:1:近几年各大考研基地对社会讽刺性的文章已经有较大研究,相对而言,社会讽刺性文章已经显得容易入手。所以出题人可能相对喜欢出一些比较中性的问题,比如最近两年的合作,自信,此类类型可结成人生哲理问题。本文
是针对讽刺性与人生哲理而写的。其它方面的类型,别图表可能不是很适用,但但相信其中某些句子对大家还是有帮助的。
2:文章开头希望最后引入对某个问题的探讨,以便第三段对问题提出解决有跟好的衔接,It is hard to imagine what our society/future would be like years later if this pervasive trend goes unchallenged/we always ```````````。这段话的意味就是要引出对问题的解决。
3:本文黄色部分的单词代表的是人生哲理的,前面的单词代表是讽刺性的,切切记得。针对不同类型文章,运用不同单词段落。
4:万能作文当然也不能只抄不想的,部分空隙要求大家自己补上,尽量写得简略些,以便保持整体性。
5:对于第二段举例的部分,我建议还是举例吧,现在考研作文也经常要求举例的,你不举例了肯定扣分,举例了肯定不扣分,两者相衡,还是举例好。
6:本文单词量已经足够了,再加上大家所补上的单词,肯定很多,所以其中个别单词是可以去掉的,相信大家看得才出来。
7:如果考得是多于一副图画的,那么相应的单词应该要改变,单数变复数,这个不难吧。
最后,祝愿大家好运!
狂回了几个帖子,终于可以放上附件了。
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