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qiyanfly 发表于 08-12-29 18:18:24 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
图画描述:
As is vividly depicted in the picture(s), …… What an astonishing and meaningful scene it is!
In the first drawing, …….  In the second one, ……

意义阐释:
The purpose of the drawing(s) is to show us that due attention has to be paid to (the mistreatment of the senior citizens).  First and foremost, ……  Furthermore, no doubt, ……  Last but not least, …….

Moreover, it is harmful to the establishment of a harmonious society.
Just opposite to the above, ……
There is no denying that the industry is indications of civilization, progress and development. Unfortunately, as industry develops, so will the number of factories, and the amount of industry pollutions.

建议措施:
Accordingly, it is imperative for us to take drastic measures to resolve the serious problem (reverse this disturbing trend illustrated in the above picture). First, relevant laws and regulations should be made to severely punish those who ……. Second, in my opinion, it is necessary to carry out a nation-wide campaign publicizing people who …….. Third, we should cultivate the awareness of the young that ……. Only in this way can we curb the current evil phenomenon revealed in the picture(s).
Only in this way can we build up a harmonious society and achieve sustainable development (strike a sustainable development of the world).

Although nowadays people in mounting numbers ……
In my opinion, ……
There is no denying that ……
And also parents should give proper advice to there children to form a proper outlook of the world.

Therefore, it is imperative for us to take drastic measures to reverse this disturbing trend illustrated in the above pictures. To begin with, we should appeal to the authorities to make strict laws to control commercial fishing. Besides, we should cultivate the awareness of people that sustainable development is vital (of great significance) to us. Only in this way can we protect our natural environment. I believe than we humans can surmount this difficulty and we will have a brilliant future.

举例论证:
Examples to prove the view are abundant. The most persuasive are the cases of famous athletes like Fu Mingxia and Ding Yaping, whose success is gained through non-stop efforts. By contrast, a lot of people choose to ……. To sum up, keeping making progress should be the right attitude towards life and work for everybody and even for a country.

One Chinese example would be China national women’s volleyball team, while abroad Thomas Edison and Lincoln come to mind.

A case in point is the Project Hope. …… Let’s take another example. For instance when ……, just …….

I can think of no better illustration than the following one. Helen Keller was born deaf, dumb and blind, certainly nothing to give her self-confidence. Nevertheless, she went on to conquer her multiple handicaps to finally become a writer and lecturer, to become an inspiration to all. This case effectively clarifies that no matter what tasks we are confronted with, we should never overestimate the difficulties or underestimate our abilities.

As is shown in the picture, on arriving at the finishing line of a race on the playground, the active young man has to continue his new journey in no time instead of stopping to take a rest. He has successfully settled the puzzle of "stopping or going on" which might have confused many others.
With the increasing pace of modern life, perhaps ……. It is generally agreed upon that …… On the one hand, no doubt, ……. Take the famous scientist Thomas Edison for example. He had done very well in his early life, but continued to pursue something more difficult all through his life. On the other hand, if one is obsessed with the success he has achieved, he would lose the chance to pursue new success. What is more, he may become the slave of his success. There are many cases showing that people lose their courage to better themselves after becoming successful.
To sum up, one's view on his success determines his future. In my opinion, it is necessary to carry out a nation-wide campaign publicizing people who have a burning desire for more and ever greater achievement when they are already well known. So that people in the society will develop a forward-looking attitude and make their life worth living and the world more beautiful as well.

As the old saying goes, “Faith will move mountains.”
“One reaps what one sows.” “Practice make perfect.”
As John F. Kennedy put it, “Ask not what your country can do for you; ask what you can do your country.”
“United, there is little we cannot do; divided, there is little we can do.”
I believe strongly in that the act of memorizing is more of a cognitive exercise than an intuitive one.  more……than…… 与其说,不如说


小作文:
As a student who can support myself, I am writing to request if you can help me ……
I wonder whether (if) it is convenient for you if two things regarding the child are taken into account. First, …… Second, ……(Firstly, Besides, Finally)

I am an undergraduate from the Department of Chinese Language and Literature of Beijing University.  I am writing the letter in purpose of ordering some books.

Thank you for your letter of May 1 about financial aid from Yale University.
……, and I would be grateful if you would be kind enough to provide me with certain essential information.

To solve this problem, I hope to draw the attention of the authorities concerned.

Please do not hesitate to contact me if you require any further information.
I would appreciate if you could give me a reply as soon as possible.
I take this opportunity to show my heartfelt appreciation to the kind assistance you rendered me. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.


Let us join our efforts to make great contributions to the promotion of mutual understanding and friendship between the people’s of China and Scotland.

我的练习:
Dear Mr. Wang,
I am very glad to learn from your letter of May 1 in which you brought the best opportunity to me. I will cherish the position and try my best to do it well.
I would be grateful if you would be kind enough to tell me when I start to work and detailed information about my work, for I am extremely eager to work as soon as possible and do a series of preparation to my job. Please let me know if you have further requests for being an assistance editor.
I would like to take the opportunity to show my heartfelt appreciation to the kind of assistance you rendered me. I am looking forward to working with you soon.
                                                       Sincerely yours,
                                                       Li Ming

As is vividly depicted in the picture, despite the tree protects him from sunlight exposure by a green “umbrella”, a man with an axe is cutting a tree. What an astonishing and meaningful scene it is!
The purpose of the cartoon is to show us that due attention has to be paid to the environmental protection. First and foremost, more and more trees, sources, rivers and so on were destroyed by ignorant people as the development of modern economy and industry. Furthermore, it is easily for most people of the earth to earn the current profits while over-consume the natural resources which should be left to the next generation. Last but not least, the outcome of the destruction has caused seriously danger which will increasingly affect the quality of our life.
Accordingly, it is imperative for us to take drastic measures to resolve the severe problem. First, relevant laws and regulations should be made to severely punish those who destroyed our living environment. Second, it is necessary to carry out a nation-wide campaign to publicizing people who protect our environment in their daily life. Third, we also should cultivate the awareness of citizens towards the significance of environment protection. Only in this way can we build up a harmonious society and achieve sustainable development
   

As is vividly depicted in the pictures, thousands of graduates are going to find a job in conferences in Henan and Zhejiang Province. It is an astonishing scene in China.
The purpose of the pictures is to show us that hunting job is a serious problem which needs to draw attention of authorities concerned. First and foremost, some graduates want to find a job with high payment and comfortable circumstances, so they have always refused jobs which didn't conform to their requests. Furthermore, there are smaller and smaller opportunities offered by the market as the development of modern science and technologies. Last but not least, since our country is expanding the university enrollment, students in expanding numbers crowd into the society after they finished their studies.
It is imperative for us to take drastic measures to solve this problem. First, we should appeal to the governments to create more jobs to meet the increasing need. Second, we also should cultivate the awareness of the young that form the correct attitude towards employment. Third, building business by students should be encouraged in a bid to alleviate the press of employment. Only in this way can we curb the trend conveyed in the drawings.
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牛小刀 发表于 08-12-29 18:19:44 | 只看该作者
好东西  顶起啊
板凳
shaply 发表于 08-12-29 18:55:04 | 只看该作者
gan xie lou zhu fen xiang
地板
xuanyuan5d 发表于 08-12-29 21:55:28 | 只看该作者
我也顶一下
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wodasuankaoyan 发表于 08-12-29 22:12:20 | 只看该作者
非常感谢你的分享
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aprilfish 发表于 08-12-29 22:30:14 | 只看该作者
很有用,谢谢
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三虎一 发表于 08-12-29 22:32:51 | 只看该作者
谢谢 lz的分享!
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warimp 发表于 08-12-29 22:44:35 | 只看该作者
参考下啦,谢谢啊。。。。
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Lucky_No.1 发表于 08-12-29 22:50:20 | 只看该作者
楼主去年考了多少呢,发现大家自己总结的模板很相似,该不会又成为无形中的模板了吧
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huangyantao0520 发表于 08-12-29 22:52:53 | 只看该作者
xiexielouzhufenxiang
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