（转）【研英作文】写作高分佳句 Step By Step（第六期）

谢谢大家的参与。你们的支持也是我继续的动力。

注意：有越来越多的同学参与到学习班来了，是个好现象！出勤率高了，我们要保证作业完成率高，之后我们还要追求作业的优秀率和正确率。既然进来了，就静心地花20分钟时间完成所有作业，格式请参照3楼。每天都进步一小点，39天后就是质变！单靠别人的钻石经验、黄金模板，是不可能一步登天的。现在加入还不迟！！动手吧！

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事先声明：这次英语写作训练班共39期，一天一期！！！目的是对大家的写作水平提高有所帮助！！不管反响如何，我将一如既往地进行~~每天都要有收货！！！以下内容不是我原创，但觉得十分有用，就转帖在这里。每天一期！！

1.从三楼开始对前一楼的习作进行批改，建议大家使用“引用”格式，并将前一楼的错误用“颜色”标出
2.英译中
An increasing number of people are joining the " Information Age " via the Internet . In reaction to the phenomenon , some say the Internet has removed barriers and provided people with immediate access to the world . But do they realize that rapidly advancing information technology can also lead to intrusions of privacy ?

答案刷黑可见，先自己翻译再看，革命靠自觉

越来越多的人通过互联网进入了“信息时代”。针对这一现象，一些人认为互联网消除了障碍，为人们提供了与世界即时链接的途径。但是，他们有没有意识到迅速发展的信息技术也能导致侵犯隐私？
3.学习以下句型，要铭记于心啊！
An increasing number of people are....
In reaction to the phenomenon , some say....
But do they raelize that... can also lead to....

4.使用3给出的句型，写一段句子，题材不限
5.复习前一期：
中译英：
大多数人认为财富为所有问题提供解决的办法。但是，我认为，尽管财富提供物质上的利益，一个人应该放弃物质至上的追求，而是集中精力追求幸福。
答案刷黑可见，先自己翻译再看，革命靠自觉
Most people are of the opinion that wealth provides solutions to all problems . But in spite of the material benefits wealth provides , I believe one should abandon the pursuit of materialism and instead concentrate on the pursuit of happiness .
6.把给出要求仿写的句子背诵下啦，下一期会要求大家默写

大家一定要动手写啊，不要眼高手低。只有自己动手，才能知道自己的不足。

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[ 本帖最后由 tangshufang 于 2008-10-17 19:50 编辑 ]

十分感谢楼主的分享

越来越多的人们通过互联网一起加入到信息时代。对于此现象，一些人说互联网扫清了障碍，使人们更容易更快捷地去了解世界。但是他们没有意识到快速发展的信息技术也可以导致侵犯隐私？

An increasing number of people are arguing  the deterior environment.In reaction to the phenomenon,some say there must be any strategies to control the problem.But do they realize that the phenomenon can also lead to out of the control?

越来越多人通过互联网迈入了信息时代.对于这一现象,一些人认为互联网清除了障碍并且为人们提供了快速了解世界的通道.但是他们是否意识到了快速发胀的信息技术同样会引起私密的泄漏?

1、越来越多的人通过互联网同“信息时代”有了联系。针对这种现象，一些人认为互联网消除了人们联系世界的障碍，提供了快捷的方式。但是他们知道快速发展的信息技术也可能会引起侵犯个人隐私问题吗？
2、An increasing number of people are pursuing the digital products. In reation to the phenomenon,some people say digital products rich their life. But do they realize that the waste the these products may bring us some enrorimental problems.
3. Most people are of the opinion that wealth proxives solutions to all problems. But in spite of the material benifits wealth provides, I believe one should abondon the pursuit of materialism and instead concentrate on the pursiut of hapiness.

草稿本
越来越多的人正通过网络进入信息年代。根据其反应的现象，一些人说网络已经消除了障碍，提供给人们直接进入世界交流的途径。但是他们真的意识到了信息技术快速的发展可能导致个人隐私被侵犯？
An increasing number people are joining the ranks of idol worship ..In reaction to the phenomenon ,some say their idol imaging a kind fashion . But do they realize that passionate idol worship can also lead to mental lack .
前期翻译：
Most people was of the opinion that wealth provides solutions to all problms .But in spite of material benefits wealth provides,I believe one should abandon the pursuit of materialism and instead concentrate on the pursuit of happiness.
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挺想通过翻译提高的，但感觉颜色太乱了。呵呵。

2,英译中
An increasing number of people are joining the \" Information Age \" via the Internet . In reaction to the phenomenon , some say the Internet has removed barriers and provided people with immediate access to the world . But do they realize that rapidly advancing information technology can also lead to intrusions of privacy ?
越来越多的人通过互联网进入了\"信息时代\",对于这一现象,一些人认为互联网清除了障碍,提供给人们与世界即时连接的通道,当是,他们有认识到迅速发展的信息技术也能导致隐私的侵犯?

3,句型学习

An  increasing  number of people are .....
In  reaction to the phenomenon ,some say ....
But do they realize that ....can also lead to .....

4,造句
An increasing number of people are  rushing into the city  from  villages .In reaction to the phenomenon ,some say that  dose a lot of benefits to urban  infrastructure projects.But do they realise that  too many migrant  workers can also lead to the  population expansion  in the city and  the lack of the  talents in the  rural construction.

5,复习

Most people are of the opinion that  wealth provided solutions to all problems.But  in spite of the  material benefits wealth provides,I believe one should abandon the pursuit of the materialism and instead concentrate on the pursuit of happiness.

[ 本帖最后由 smilesky620 于 2008-11-8 11:33 编辑 ]

越来越多的人太难通过因特网加入到“信息时代”里来。对这种现象的反映，一些人认为因特网扫出来障碍，并且为人们提供了通向世界的快速通道。但是他们发现快速发展的信息科技也可以导致侵犯隐私么？
3. A increasing number people are arguing  wether the computer should be widly spread to the fundemental school. In reaction to this  phenomen, some say that  computer played a significant roly in obtain wild range of  knowledge .But  do they raelize that  induldged in computer can also lead to the loose of self control  and lead to a negtive  consequence .   
Most people considered that  property is the  mean which can handle all  kinds of  problem. However, as my stand view,  although  wealth prove the  material  beneficial , men should abandon pursuting the materialism and resove to  concentrate to  pursuit the happiness.

翻译        越来越多的人认为通过互联网可以进入信息时代。对于这个现象有多种反应，一些人说互联网消除了许多障碍，为人们提供了了解世界的直接通道。但是，他们也意识到快速发展的信息技术也侵犯个人隐私。