(转)【研英作文】写作高分佳句 Step By Step（第十八期）

tangshufang · 发表于 08-10-25 17:48:27

如果说“句子结构”是作文的骨架，那么“佳句”则是高分作文的灵魂，作文中有了好的句子会使作文提升档次，增加作文的分数； 【研英作文】写作高分佳句 step by step 这个节目旨在和大家一起练习句子的结构，试图和大家一同练习写出高分佳句。
每期节目都会给出一个高分佳句，大家要将它熟记，直至背诵；并根据其作文句型，结构及所给要求自己仿写句子，旨在让大家彻底将句子消化，紧随其后的一期不但会让大家默写前一期给出的句子，还会教给大家另外一个句子的句型和结构。
1.从四楼开始对前一楼的习作进行批改，建议大家使用“引用”格式，并将前一楼的错误用“颜色”标出
2.英译中
Several years ago , Chinese streets were filled with people wearing identical drab clothing . Today , however , things are quite different and the streets are awash with people wearing fashionable bright colored outfits . Why has the change taken place ?
答案刷黑可见，先自己翻译再看，革命靠自觉
(许多年前,中国大街上的人都穿一样的灰褐色衣服。然而，今天的情况大不一样了，街上满是一个个身穿色彩艳丽的时髦衣服的人。出现这种变化的原因是什么呢？)
3.学习以下句型，要铭记于心啊！
Several years ago ... Today , however , things are quite different and ... Why has the change taken place ?
.4.使用3给出的句型，写一段句子，题材不限
5.复习前一期：
中译英：
过去，人们习惯完全依赖政府。以前盛行所谓的“铁饭碗”，但今天的情况有很大的不同。
答案刷黑可见，先自己翻译再看，革命靠自觉
(People used to place total reliance on the government . The so-called " iron rice bowl " prevailed in the past , but things are quite different today .)
6.把给出要求仿写的句子背诵下啦，下一期会要求大家中译英哦～

笔记
最近几期句子表达的意思是差不多的,都是在说明过去和现在情况的对比.因此大家要多注意同一个意思的不同表达方式,选出最适合自己的背牢,转化成自己的东西.

[answerfly]1[/answerfly]

今天推荐的歌是首经典老歌，激励所有的研友，i believe i can fly.很多人都已经忘记迈克尔·乔丹主演的《空中大灌篮》，却还记得这首I believe I can fly。精制的歌词，激昂的旋律，以至歌曲所传达出的那种相信自我、积极向上的意志，无不使人振奋。

http://3wschool.cn/upfile/sa0000000000000189/sb0000000000000143/sc0000000000000190/200502/da0000000000026904/subject_files/fly.mp3

I used to think that I could not go on 我原以为我无法坚持下去，
And life was nothing but an awful song 生命只不过是首忧郁的歌，
But now I know the meaning of true love 但现在我明白了真爱的含义，
I'm leaning on the everlasting arms 找到了可以永久依靠的臂膀。
If I can see it, then I can do it 只要我能看见希望，我就能成功，
If I just believe it 我相信我能行，
There's nothing to it 那就没有什么不可以。

I believe I can fly 我相信我能飞翔，
I believe I can touch the sky 我相信我能触到天空。
I think about it every night and day 日日夜夜，我想象这一幕，
Spread my wings and fly away 展翅高飞……
I believe I can soar 我相信我能高飞，
I see me running through that open door 我看见我穿过那敞开的生命之门,
I believe I can fly 我相信我能飞翔,
I believe I can fly 我相信我能飞翔,
I believe I can fly 我相信我能飞翔。

See I was on the verge of breaking down 看，我在崩溃堕落的边缘，
Sometimes silence can seem so loud 有时沉默也能震耳欲聋。
There are miracles in life I must achieve 生命中很多奇迹等我去实现，
But first I know 但我知道要实现奇迹，
It starts inside of me, oh 就必须先从我做起。
If I can see it 如果我还能看见希望，
Then I can be it 我就能成为那个我想成为的人，
If I just believe it 我相信我能行，
There's nothing to it 那就没有什么不可以。

I believe I can fly 我相信我能飞翔，
I believe I can touch the sky 我相信我能触到天空。
I think about it every night and day 日日夜夜，我想象这一幕，
Spread my wings and fly away 展翅高飞……
I believe I can soar 我相信我能高飞，
I see me running through that open door 我看见我穿过那敞开的生命之门,
I believe I can fly 我相信我能飞翔,
I believe I can fly 我相信我能飞翔,
I believe I can fly 我相信我能飞翔。

Hey, cuz I believe in me, oh 因为我相信自己
If I can see it 如果我还能看见希望，
Then I can be it 我就能成为那个我想成为的人，
If I just believe it 我相信我能行，
There's nothing to it 那就没有什么不可以。
I believe I can fly 我相信我能飞翔，
Hey, if I just spread my wings 只要我张开自己的翅膀。
I can fly 我可以飞翔，
I can fly 我可以飞翔，
I can fly, hey 我可以飞翔，
If I just spread my wings 只要我张开自己的翅膀。
I can fly 我可以飞翔。

[ 本帖最后由 tangshufang 于 2008-10-26 15:21 编辑 ]

smilesky620 · 发表于 08-11-22 19:07:59

谢谢楼主

2,英译中

很多年前,中国的大街上的人都穿着一样的灰褐色的衣服.然而,今天的情况不一样了,满大街都是穿者色彩鲜亮,时尚衣服的人们.出现这些情况的原因是什么呢?

3,学习

Several years ago...Today ,however ,things are quite different and ...Why has the change taken place?

4,造句
Several years ago people shows little insterest on enjoying a movie a cinema ,Today ,however ,things are quite different and the all seats are occupied when a great film realeased.Why has the change taken place?

5,复习
People used to place total reliance on the government.The so called \"iron nice bowl\"prevailed in the past ,but things are quite different today .

[ 本帖最后由 smilesky620 于 2008-11-22 19:17 编辑 ]

yianpu · 发表于 08-10-30 15:59:16

1.几年前，中国的街道上满是穿着穿着款式同一而且乏味的衣服的人。但是现在情况不一样了，街上的人们都穿着时尚而且多姿多彩的衣服，为什么会发生这样的变化呢？
2.Several years ago ,chinese parenst are keen their kid can become a college student.today,however,things are quite different and mang pf them are think go to a technology scholl is not to bad.Why has the change taken place?
3.People used to place total relance on the government,the so-called \"iron bowl\"precalied in the pat,butthings are quite different today.

guoguogtj · 发表于 08-10-26 20:58:34

这一期好棒哦！！发了这么多的考元也！

tangshufang · 发表于 08-10-26 15:22:19

出19期了

xjyy · 发表于 08-10-26 11:43:56

许多年前，中国街道上挤满了穿着同样颜色单调的衣服的人，然而现在大不相同了，街上涌动着穿着时尚色彩艳丽衣服的人。为什么会发生这种变化呢？

Several years ago,people just want to eat fully.Today , however , things are quite different and people not only eat fully but also eat healthily.Why has the change taken place ?

People used to place total reliance on the government .the so-called\"iron ricebowl\"prevailed in the past ,but things are quite different today.

s03211076 · 发表于 08-10-26 10:04:54

补上，why has the change taken place?

s03211076 · 发表于 08-10-26 10:03:21

1.许多年前，中国大街上出现的都是穿同样的灰褐色衣服的人。然而在今天情形完全不同了，大街上到处都是身着色彩鲜艳的时髦的衣装的人们。为什么会发生这么大的变化呢？
2 . Several years ago , people used to be fascinated with city life .Today,however,things are quite different and an increasing number of people begin to realize that country life which is full of friendly people ,a clean atmosphere ,a closeness to nature is a better choice .
3. People used to place total reliance on the government. The so-called iron rice bowl prevailed in the past , but things are quite different today

guoguogtj · 发表于 08-10-25 22:37:52

哇，又到底了。。。

许多年以前，中国的大街上人们都穿的深色衣服，然而如今有所不同的是，取而代之的时尚靓丽的服装。为什么会出现这样的原因？

Several years ago, there wasn\'t a standar language throughout China.Today , however , things are quite different and mandarin has sharply promoted .Why has the change taken place ?

abc_echo · 发表于 08-10-25 22:34:16

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