(转)【研英作文】写作高分佳句 Step By Step（第20期）

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1.从四楼开始对前一楼的习作进行批改，建议大家使用“引用”格式，并将前一楼的错误用“颜色”标出
2.英译中
Traditional way of thinking have changed dramatically . The pendulum has swung and people are exhibiting greater open-mindedness and a burning desire to detemine their own destiny .



答案刷黑可见，先自己翻译再看，革命靠自觉
(传统的思维方式有了显著的变化。舆论发生了剧变，人们表现出更开放的思想以及决定他们自己命运的强烈愿望。)
3.学习以下句型，要铭记于心啊！
Traditional way of thinking have changed dramatically . The pendulum has swung ...
.4.使用3给出的句型，写一段句子，题材不限
5.复习前一期：
中译英：
一位著名的思想家曾经写道：“对人类最大的威胁是人类自身！”如果事实确实如此，那么，现状应该促使我们对我们未来的生存进行思索了。
答案刷黑可见，先自己翻译再看，革命靠自觉
(A famous thinker once wrote that " the greatest threat to mankind is mankind itself ! " If this is indeed the case , then the current situation should make us ponder our futuer existence .)
6.把给出要求仿写的句子背诵下啦，下一期会要求大家中译英哦～






笔记
1.词汇:dramatically 剧烈的,引人注目的.修饰change,使句子更生动.
2.比喻句:The pendulum has swung ,  用钟摆的摆动来比喻事情的变化.
3.burning desire 强烈愿望
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今天推荐的是Katie Melua - Nine Million Bicycles

http://web.5151net.com/heliguanggao/duoduo/900.mp3

其实这首歌很好听，自己用当手机闹钟铃声，形成了习惯反射，一听到就想到起床就很烦…… ，附上歌词

There are nine million bicycles in Beijing 北京城里有900万辆自行车
That's a fact 这是个事实
It's a thing we can't deny 是我们无法否认的事
Like the fact that I will love you till I die 就像我会爱你直到死去

We are twelve billion light years from the edge 我们离时间尽头有120亿光年
That's a guess 那只是个猜测
No-one can ever say it's true 没人能说那是真的
But I know that I will always be with you 但我知道我会一直跟你在一起

I'm warmed by the fire of your love everyday 你的爱天天都温暖着我
So don't call me a liar 别说我是说谎者
Just believe everything that I say 要相信我所说的一切

There are six billion people in the world 在这世上有60亿人
More or less 差不多
And it makes me feel quite small 这让我感觉挺渺小
But you're the one I love the most of all 但你是我最爱的人
We're high on the wire 我们站得很高
With the world in our sight 眼里能看见全世界
And I'll never tire 而且我从不厌倦
Of the love that you give me every night 你所给我的爱

There are nine million bicycles in Beijing 北京城里有900万辆自行车
That's a fact 这是个事实
It's a thing we can't deny 这事我们无法否认
Like the fact that I will love you till I die 就像我会爱你至死
And there are nine million bicycles in Beijing北京城里有900万辆自行车
And you know that I will love you till I die 而你也知道我会爱你直到死去

[ 本帖最后由 tangshufang 于 2008-10-28 13:36 编辑 ]

2, 英译中
传统的思维方式发生了显著的变化, 事情已经发生剧变,人们表现出更开放的思想和做自己命运主人的强烈渴望.

3,学习
Traditional way of thining have changed dramtically,The pendrulum has swung ...


4,造句
Traditional way of thing have changed dramtically,The pendrulum has swung  and  people are exhibing greater enthusiasm to  take part in charities .

5,复习
A  famous thinker once wrote that :\"the greater threat to mankind is mankind it self .\"If this is indeed the case,then the current situation should make us ponder our future existence.

[ 本帖最后由 smilesky620 于 2008-11-22 19:28 编辑 ]

传统的思维方式有了明显的变化。钟摆已经摆动？？？...人们表现出更加的开放思想，热烈的期望去决定他们拥有的命运……（我都不明白我在说什么…… ）
整合一下……
传统的思维方式有了明显的变化。这种变化使人们表现出更加开放的思想和决定他们自己命运的热烈期望。

Traditional way of thinking have changed dramatically . The pendulum has swung and more people believing their intelligence and ability.

A famous thinker once wrote that \" the greatest threat to mankind is mankind itself ! \" If this is indeed the case , then the current situation should make us ponder our futuer existence .

出21期了

我晕死了The pendulum has swung 呵呵
看来我的单词量实在少的可怜！
都说英语学习要方法，
现在看来，还是勤奋最重要
深刻的反省！

思维的传统方式已经发生了戏剧性的变化，局面的摇摆不定和人们表现出的极大的开放思想以及燃烧的渴望，这些去决定他们自己的命运。
Traditional way of thinking have changed dramatically. The pendulum has swung....

1.传统的思维方式有了显著的变化。舆论发生了剧烈变化。人们展示了更开放的心态以及决定他们命运的强烈愿望。
2. Traditional way of thinking have changed dramatically.The pendulum has swung and  more relience are on one\'s strive than celebrated background  for a prosperous  future.
3.A famous thinker once wrote that \"the greatest threat to  mankind is mankind  itself.\" If  it is indeed the case,then the current situation  should make us ponder our  future existence.

1.翻译：
  传统的思维方式发生了急剧的变化，人们表现出更加开放的心态和对主宰自己命运的强烈愿望。
2.造句：
   Traditional way of thinking have changed dramatically . The pendulum has swung and  there is a growing tendency for  people  that living  enjoying the life rather than only for bread.  
3.复习 ：
    A famous thinker once wrote that \" the greatest threat to mankind is mankind itself ! \" If this is indeed the case , then the current situation should make us ponder our futuer existence .  

2、传统的思维方式已经发生显著的改变。..........译不出......人们表现出更加开放的思想和决定他们自己命运的强烈愿望。
3、Traditional way of thinking have changed dramatically . The pendulum has swung
4、Traditional way of thinking have changed dramatically . The pendulum has swung  and we cann\'t make headway to  whatever needs experiencing trials of new ideas.
5、A famous  thinker  once wrote that \" the  greatest threat to mankind is  mankind itself .\"  If this is indeed case ,then the current situation should make us ponder our futuer exsitance.
难啊，造句！想破脑袋，憋出个。

传统的思考方法已经在很大程度上改变了。这个变化使得人们有了更开放的思想以及决定自己命运的愿望的增加。
A famous thinker once wrote\"Humans  `most threaten are themself\"
If this is really the case, then the current situation should make us ponder our future
呵呵，名言成了自己的话了，而且还不好