（转）【研英作文】写作高分佳句 Step By Step（第23期）

[fly]打个广告 ：新节目开播——（原创）研英词汇超级大练兵[/fly]
适合人群：词汇记得6成熟的研友。
主要内容：词汇深度记忆，短语积累，完型辨析词汇。
作业提交方式：比step by step还easy哦，简单高效单词大练兵！
原创第一期链接地址：http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-330359-1-1.html




step by atep目前所有链接：在二楼
第二十四期的链接地址：http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-331257-1-1.html


1.从四楼开始对前一楼的习作进行批改，建议大家使用“引用”格式，并将前一楼的错误用“颜色”标出
2.英译中

The ample evidence presented enables us to reasonably conclude that the scourge of AIDS will be brought under control in the foreseeable future .



答案刷黑可见，先自己翻译再看，革命靠自觉
(提出充分的证据使我们能够合理地得出这样的结论：艾滋病的祸害在可预见的将来就能得到控制。)
3.学习以下句型，要铭记于心啊！
The ample evidence presented enables us to reasonably conclude that ...

.4.使用3给出的句型，写一段句子，题材不限
5.复习前一期：
中译英：
根据现有的大量证据，我们可以有把握地得出这样的结论：三峡工程将永远改变无数人的生活。
答案刷黑可见，先自己翻译再看，革命靠自觉
(Judging from the reams of evidence presented , we can safely conclude that the Three Gorges Project will change the lives of an untold number of people forever .)
6.把给出要求仿写的句子背诵下啦，下一期会要求大家中译英哦～

ps.cookie :　跟上一期表达的是一个意思，选个适合自己的背诵：）[answerfly]1[/answerfly]

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今天推荐的歌

歌名：Gotta Have You 〖必须有你〗
专辑：Say I Am You
演唱：The Weepies

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这歌和蔡健雅的《越来越不懂》是一个调调，声音很好听。清晨咖啡的味道，让人忍不住跟着轻声哼唱~~~

http://224.cachefile3.rayfile.com/fecf/zh-cn/preview/047975dc07ece3645860aa736b5bd779/preview.mp3

记得积累地道的英文表达方式哦

歌词附上：

Gray, quiet and tired and mean
Picking at a worried seam
I try to make you mad at me over the phone
Red eyes and fire and signs
I'm taken by a nursery rhyme
I want to make a ray of sunshine and never leave home
No amount of coffee
No amount of crying
No amount of whiskey
No amount of wine
No, nothing else will do
I've gotta have you
I've gotta have you
The road gets cold
There's no spring in the middle this year
I'm the new chicken clucking open hearts and ears
Oh, such a prima Donna
Sorry for myself
But green, it is also summer
And I won't be warm till I'm lying in your arms
No amount of coffee
No amount of crying
No amount of whiskey
No amount of wine
No, nothing else will do
I've gotta have you
I've gotta have you
I see it all through a telescope:
Guitar, suitcase, and a warm coat
Lying in the back of the blue boat
Humming a tune...
No amount of coffee
No amount of crying
No amount of whiskey
No wine
No, nothing else will do
I've gotta have you
I've gotta have you
No amount of coffee
No amount of crying
No amount of whiskey
No amount of wine
No, nothing else will do
I've gotta have you ~~
gotta have you
I've gotta have you

[ 本帖最后由 tangshufang 于 2008-10-31 20:59 编辑 ]

谢谢楼主
2，英译中

The ample evidence presented enables us to reasonably conclude that the scourge of AIDS will be brought under control in the foreseeable future .

提出来的足够多的证据让我们能够合理地得出这样的结论：艾滋病的祸害在未来可预见的时期能够得到控制。

3，学习句型

The ample evidence presented enables us to reasonably conclude that ...

4，造句
The ample evedence presented enables us to reasonably conclude that our living standards will be improved  constantly.

5，复习
根据现有的大量证据，我们可以有把握地得出这样的结论：三峡工程将永远改变无数人的生
Judgeing from the reams of evidence presented ,we can safely conclude that the Tree Gorges Project will change the lives of an  untold number of peole forever.

转的好啊！~~~ [s:2]

谢谢分享！

2大量证据使我们的出结论在不久的将来艾滋病的危害将得到控制.

谢谢楼主分享，楼主辛苦啦！！！[s:2] [s:2] [s:2]

谢谢楼主分享，楼主辛苦啦！！！[s:2] [s:2] [s:2]

^_^第二十四期的链接地址：http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-331257-1-1.html

我们可以通过大量的证据合理的做出这样一个推论：在可预见的将来AIDS的危害将处于控制当中。

The ample  evidence presented enable us to reasonably conclude that  cat is more intelligent than mouce.

Judging form the reams of  evidence presented,we can safely conclude that  The Three Gorges Project will change  the lives of an untold number  of people forever.

找不到24期了只能到这里先呆一会咯~~