（转）【研英作文】写作高分佳句 Step By Step（第24期）

出25期了：http://bbs.freekaoyan.com/thread-331423-1-1.html

1.从四楼开始对前一楼的习作进行批改，建议大家使用“引用”格式，并将前一楼的错误用“颜色”标出
2.英译中

We must seek immediate solutions for problems leading to the rapid depletion of the earth's ozone layer . If allowed to proceed unchecked , the problem will undoubtedly exacerbate global warming and threaten life as we know it today .



答案刷黑可见，先自己翻译再看，革命靠自觉
(我们必须寻求立即解决引起地球臭氧层快速损耗的问题的办法。如果任其自由发展，这一问题无疑会加剧全球升温，并且正如今天我们所知道的那样危及生命。。)
3.学习以下句型，要铭记于心啊！
We must seek immediate solutions for problems leading ... If allowed to proceed unchecked , the problem will undoubtedly ...
.4.使用3给出的句型，写一段句子，题材不限
5.复习前一期：
中译英：
提出充分的证据使我们能够合理地得出这样的结论：艾滋病的祸害在可预见的将来就能得到控制。
答案刷黑可见，先自己翻译再看，革命靠自觉
(The ample evidence presented enables us to reasonably conclude that the scourge of AIDS will be brought under control in the foreseeable future ..)
6.把给出要求仿写的句子背诵下啦，下一期会要求大家中译英哦～[answerfly]1[/answerfly]

今天，推荐，一首你十分熟悉的歌~~~~听了就知道

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歌手名：david usher

专辑名：morning orbit

歌名：black black heart

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http://www.ualberta.ca/~youze/black%20black%20heart.mp3

something ugly this way comes
through my fingers sliding inside
all these blessings all these burns
im godless underneath your cover
search for pleasure search for pain
in this world now i am undying
i unfurl my flag my nation helpless
black black heart why would you offer more
why would you make it easier on me to satisfy
im on fire im rotting to the core
im eating all your kings and queens
all your sex and your diamonds
as i begin to lose my grip
on these realities your sending
taste your mind and taste your sex
im naked underneath your cover
covers lie and we will bend and borrow
with the coming sign
the tide will take the sea will rise and time will rape
black black heart why would you offer more
why would you make it easier on me to satisfy
im on fire im rotting to the core
im eating all your kings and queens
all your sex and your diamonds
black black heart why would you offer more
why would you make it easier on me to satisfy
im on fire im rotting to the core
im eating all your kings and queens
all your sex and your diamonds

[ 本帖最后由 tangshufang 于 2008-11-2 13:51 编辑 ]

楼主辛苦了~~~

2，英译中
We must seek immediate solutions for problems leading to the rapid depletion of the earth\'s ozone layer . If allowed to proceed unchecked , the problem will undoubtedly exacerbate global warming and threaten life as we know it today .
我们必须寻求立即的措施来解决引起地球臭氧层迅速损耗的问题，如果任其发展，不加制止，这一问题无疑将加剧全球升温，并且如我们所料那样危及生命。


3，学习
We must seek immediate solutions for problems leading ... If allowed to  proceed unchecked,the problem will undoubtedly...

4，造句
We must seek immediate solutions for problems leading to severe neglect to our traditional  festivals.If allowed to proceed unchecked ,the problem will undoubtedly  be a disaster our excellent  5000 years old tradtional culture.

5，复习
The ample evidence presented enables us to reasonably conclude that the scourge of AIDS will be brought under control in the foreseeable future.

谢谢楼主分享，楼主辛苦啦！！！[s:2] [s:2] [s:2]

谢谢楼主分享，楼主辛苦啦！！！[s:2] [s:2] [s:2]

1.我们必须寻求解决导致地球臭氧层破坏的方法，如果任由这种情况发展下去，这个问题无疑会加剧全球变暖，并且正如今天我们所知道的那样威胁到我们的生活。
2.We must seek immediate solutions for problems leading the graduates unemployed. If allowed to proceed unchecked,the problem will undoubtedly threaten to social stability.in the foreseeable future.
3.The ample evidence presented enables us to  reasonably  conclude that the scourge of AIDS will be brought under control in the foreseeable future.

2、我们必须寻找立即解决引起地球臭氧层快速变薄的问题的办法。如果不抑制这种趋势任其恶化，那么这一问题无疑会加剧全球变暖，并且如今天我们所知道的一样威胁生命。
4、We must seek immediate solutions for problems leading  to the stress of competition.If allowed to proceed unchecked , the problem will undoubtedly result  in  many mental diseases and  much of social misconduct.
5、The ample evidence presented enables us to reasonably conclude that the scounge of AIDS will be brought under control in the forseeable future.

我们必须寻找迅速的解决引起地球加快臭氧层破坏的这一问题的方法，如果任其发展，这一问题将无疑加剧全球变暖，像我们今天所知道的那样威胁我们的生活

我今天就等着24期呢 要不估计晚上都睡不着啦！~哈哈哈

明天在做，今天累了，睡

2、英译中
我们必须采取即时的解决办法，解决地球臭氧层变稀薄的问题。如果任由其发展，毫无疑问，它会加剧全球暖化，威胁万物生命，就像我们今天所了解的情况一样。

4 造句
We must seek immediate solutions for problems leading to speedy deforestation. If allowed to proceed unchecked, the problem will undoubtedlly aggravate sand storm.

5、复习
实在记不起来了，做个中译英的工作吧
The ample pieces of evidence can spur us to reasonablely conclude that the scourge of ADIS will be controled in foresee future.

reasonably
foreseeable