Dear Sir or Madam,
I write this letter to you to place a strong complaint of the bad services I received during my trip to Beijing eight days ago.
During the week long holiday, what I experienced was rather annoying.I must tell you that I am not satisfied with the hotel services your agency arranged for us.The surrounding environment round the hotel I lived in was so noisy that I slept lightly that night.What made matters worse is that the food provided by the hotel was not wholesome.After I took the breakfast, I felt sick and got a stomachache.That almost completely spoilt my trip.
Given all this, I strongly insist that you should return me some of the money.I’m looking forward to an early reply from you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
【参考范文】
In the thought provoking picture, a young man is sitting on the chair in an autobus that is allocated specially for the old, the weak, the pregnant, the disabled, children and the like.Regrettably, he must have neglected the pregnant lady standing just beside him.The painful scene must set the citizenry starting to think seriously about the moral decline in the country.
Some of this can be attributed to the lack of morality, a problem that is being shown particularly in the younger generation. Their sense of moral standards seems to be withering although their material comforts have been considerably enhanced. What makes matters even worse is the fact that such misdeeds as spitting, picking flowers in public gardens or making noises in public places are becoming so pervasive that they are likely to be taken for granted by the public. With today\'s worsening morality, social bonds have been weakened, replaced by a greater emphasis on self. That is why new ideas must come forward to improve the country\'s moral climate, though the challenge cannot be underestimated.
Moral decline will not be reversed until we find new ways to improve our moral standards. For adults, we can make use of every chance to remind young people of the importance of good manners, both as a competent citizen in modern society and as a model for them to follow. Only in this way can the moral climate of our nation be improved, and we sincerely wish that the young man in the picture could realize that he has sit on a \"wrong\" seat.
随着社会的进步和经济的发展，人们的生活水平在不断提高，但是社会的道德标准却在不断的下降。图中的年轻人对旁边孕妇的无视，没有给她让出座位，可以说是道德标准下降的表现。
本文从图画的描写着手，在第一段简要地说明了图画的内容，并点明了道德下降这一令人深思的问题。在第二自然段就道德水平下降的问题展开论证。在第三自然段提出了解决的方案。
整篇文章主要采用的是分析性的阐述思维方法，先表明了作者的观点，之后进行具体的论证。围绕着“年轻人”、“道德下降”、“氛围”、“社会公民”等关键词概念展开。
注意如果出现“公共道德”、“人际关系”等话题可以参照此文思路写作。 |
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