2008年考研英语作文万能模版
共写十七个句子
所谓万能这个概念，如果大家都去这么用的话，就等于没有用了。PartB部分是有的，但是partA没有，PartB可以基本上把这个文章全写完的一个模板方式。万能模板，你这么想，大家告诉我，只要一个题目能够转变成一社会现象之后，最好准备两到三套大的万能无敌模式。关于万能模式的几个问题：
一、我们选用的句子的灵活性强，经过了精心的选择
二、句型都是五星级,并在开头和长短句子方面有设计,并注意语法的丰富,每句话语法都不同.
三、我们选的句子与市面的任何资料都不同
四、很多同学说写的一样是否是雷同，不大可能，因为很难分到一个考场批判危害性的框架
总共写十七个句子.
第一段四个句子,第一句宏观描述图画,并谈图画看似可笑但发人深思.第二句写出图画最强烈的视觉效果,第三句是主题句,谈用二十个单词的爆发力句型谈该现象对个人的发展和进步有破坏性,并引发思考,第四句是用贬义词批判这个现象是强烈的指责。
第二段七个句子,首先第一句从宏观上谈这种现象的总的有两到三个点危害或者原因,第二句谈这个现象的第一个危害,用 “not only, but also”的五星级句子,通常是谈对个人身心健康的危害性, 第三个句子谈第二个危害,通常是用一个豪华级的比较级的句子,让老师耳目一新,通常是谈这个现象对社会的危害.第四个句子谈对家庭或学校的危害.第五个句子谈一个代替 “for example”的十五个单词的好句子,意思是说没有更好的例子来证明正如下文.第六个句子是例子群体的出现,谈根据一项调查表明,80%以上的人只要从事经历过这个消极的现象一定会对个人在精神和生活上有危害.最后一句话是预测趋势的二十五个单词的钻石级的句子,谈以下预测趋势,表明这种现象再这样下去,就会导致恶劣的结果出现,甚至是毁灭性的后果。
第三段六个句子, 第一个句子是下个结论,谈解决问题的必要性.第二个句子是第一个建议谈的是加强立法惩治这个现象,第三个句子谈提高人们的觉悟关于着这个现象能提高人们对这个现象的觉悟.第四个句子谈个谚语,谈一下实践我的建议的重要性.五个句子谈解决的任重道远.第六个句子是解决问题之后的美好的未来。
第一段
(1)As is vividly depicted in the picture, ，which seems to be humorous and ridiculous but thought-provoking on second thoughts.(2)The most striking feature that impresses me deeply is that unbelievably, ，(3)Recent few years has witnessed a phenomenon of 主题 which seems to be disastrous to individual survival and prosperity. (4)This phenomenon of 主题 should be condemned severely or made illegal. (5)There is no doubt that its symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration.
中间段落从两方面论证问题的危害，并举例论证，预测危害的趋势
(1) To account for the above-mentioned phenomenon, several serious effects have been put forward. (2)To begin with,主题 not only results does harm to our physical and mental health but also results in a frustrating and humiliating life. (3)In addition, nothing is more harmful than主题 to contradict with a harmonious society. (4)Last but not the least, no issue is as harmful as 主题 to increase family burdens, which is a threatening situation we are unwilling to see. (5)No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below . (6)According to a survey made by China Daily, 63.93% of young people who have ever experienced主题will live a dull life or even feel loss of hope about the future. (7)If we cannot take useful means, we may not control this trend, and some undesirable results may come out unexpectedly, we will see the gloomy future of something.
最后一段要强调解决问题，谈的两点建议通常是提高人们的意识，加强执法
(1)From what have been discussed above, it is therefore, necessary that some effective measures are taken to prevent主题. (2)On the one hand, we should be sensible to strengthen the enforcement of the laws to protect something. (3)On the other hand, it is demanding for us to keep people aware of the importance of saving somebody out of the evil hands of destruction. (4)However, it is easier said than done. (5)Although the fight against it is long-standing and tremendous one,our efforts will eventually pay off.(6) Only when you attention to it can you see a colorful and harmonious future better sooner or later.
积极有利型的文章
第一段谈的是三个句子,第一,二个句子都是在描述图画,第三句子这个现象对社会发展的积极的现象,第四个句子是图画简单,寓意深刻.
第二个段子,第一个句子谈一个十二个单词的爆发力的主题句,第二个句子谈这个现象的永恒的社会含义,用一个三十五个单词的钻石级的排比句子,谈只要有这个现象就可以让我们不断有意义的事情,征服挑战和竞争,并最后走向成功.第三个可以从反面谈如果没有这个积极现象,人们生活就忧闷,有挫折感,无前进动力,前途渺茫.第四个句子谈有两个大的好处.第五个句子谈第一个好处,通常是让生活丰富,有效率.再谈第二个好处通常是谈一些个人发展或社会进步的好处.第五个句子是代替for example的五星级的句子.第六个是具体的举例子,谈根据一项调查表明,80%的人只要利用这个积极的现象就容易改变人生,提高素质.也可以单独举个性例子,第七个句子是倒装句子谈只有这个现象才能让我们成为社会的成功者
第三个段子首句 谈二十五个单词的超豪华的句子,谈无论做大事还是小事,无论做难事还是容易事,都要这个积极现象.第二个句子谈有两点建议让它变的更好.第三个句子谈让它变的更好的第一个方法,通常发挥它的好处,避免坏处.第四个句子谈第二个方法,第五个句子谈个谚语,第六个谈解决任务的任重道远.第七个倒装句谈只要有这个积极现象就会享受一个美好,丰富和有活力的未来.
文章以团队精神为例子
(1)As is vividly depicted in the picture,(描述图画).(2) The most striking feature is(图画重点信息).(3)There is no doubt that its symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration.
(1)As is symbolically revealed in the set of drawings, the fact that(重复上面的图画信息) profoundly indicates that team work is momentous (重要的) and fundamental to any one who undertakes great deeds. (2)Undoubtedly, it is team work that keeps us continually doing something valuable and admirable in spite of difficulty, that makes us still full of energy to face the coming challenges and competition and that offers us the foundation for the coming success. (3)If we don not cooperate sincerely, we will live a dull and depressing life and feel frustrated and humiliated or feel loss of hope about the future. (4)As far as I am concerned, there are several advantages that can be given as below. To begin with, nothing is more beneficial than team work to overcome our defects and improve our efficiency. (5)Secondly, no issue is as good as team work to make our life more colorful and energetic.(6)No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below. (7)A person who is assigned various jobs along the production lines will make a mess just because no one can be proficient in all the things. (8)Only by cooperating with other people can you put your capacities into full play and can you be the winner in the society.
(1)From what have been discussed above,it admits of no doubt that in doing things whether great or small there are more or less difficulties, it is much better for one to involve yourself into a team work. (2)It is therefore, necessary that some effective measures are taken to make your team work more efficient. (3)On the one hand, we should be sensible to be receptive to other people’s opinions and benefits. (4)On the other hand, it is demanding for us to be always helpful and honest to other people.(5) However, it is easier said than done. Practice is the most important factor. (6)Only when you pay attention to it can you make it better sooner or later.
人类社会的永恒话题, 对比论述突出好处,比如坚持不懈, 打败自我,团队精神,为人真诚,实事求是从正面列举该积极事物的好处,克服困难, 征服挑战, 完善自我,走向成功,创造辉煌从反面列举没有这个积极事物时的不好, 郁闷迷茫, 无成就感和前进动力, 失败挫折感最后要谈两点建议措施和联想美好未来
话题：坚持不懈---------------在失败的时候坚持, 做好每一件小事为成功做好准备.
首段：四句话，描述图画，表明图画发人深思。
As is vividly depicted in the picture, 描述图画. The most striking feature is 图画重点信息.
描述图画两句，第一句宏观表明图画的视觉效果。 第二句表明的图画的最大特色是什么。
There is no doubt that its symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration.
此句子表明图画所微妙传达的象征含义，发人深思，十四个单词增加亮点，弥补首段字数不足，为下文点名观点作好铺垫
Recent few years has witnessed a phenomenon that which plays an active part in our society.
二段：七句话，揭示象征含义，从正反两方面论述该积极事物的重要性。从正面列举该积极事物的好处,克服困难, 征服挑战, 完善自我,走向成功,创造辉煌从反面列举没有这个积极事物时的不好, 郁闷迷茫, 无成就感和前进动力, 失败挫折感，而且要举例证明使观点具体化，并以倒装并列句结尾，画龙点睛。
As is symbolically revealed in the set of drawings, the fact that 重复上面的图画信息
profoundly indicates that perseverance is momentous (重要的) and fundamental to any one who undertakes great deeds.任何积极话题必然与成功有联系，成功是衡量该话题是否积极的唯一标准。该段首句设置爆发力句型，增加气势，让老师给出很高的第一印象分，借此开头很有特色。
Perseverance means that people can persist on when they face the difficulty and prepare every detail for the coming success.定义法论述：毅力—在困境中坚持，做好细节，准备成功；
It is perseverance that keeps us continually doing something valuable and admirable , that makes us still full of energy to face the coming challenges and competition and that offers us the foundation for the coming success.强调并列句是英语的极品句型，大气磅礴。此万能句子是任何积极事物都可以帮助我们克服困难,征服挑战,走向成功.
Unless we stick to our dream,(适当把主题词进行同义替换)we will live a dull and depressing life and feel frustrated and humiliated, only to be eliminated. 双重否定句子从反面论证宏观说明危害性，如果缺乏该积极事物就生活郁闷挫折被竞争所淘汰。 To account for the above mentioned topic, several reasons can be put forward as mentioned below. To begin with In addition Last but not the least No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below. (举例证明把for example 写成十四个很有特色，而且表明下面的例子很重要，又增加一分，老师看了这么多for example，审美疲劳，老师一看该句，一定激动。
Many capable people who have the burning desire to win fail to achieve their goals just because they don’t persist (是坚持的同意改写)especially when they face the music.
Many people who。。。。。。just because。。。。。。想成功但失败因为他们不能坚持特别是遇到困难的时候，
Only by being perseverant can they guarantee a success and have a strong will to always challenge themselves.指的是永远成功 倒装并列句在段落末尾写，增加气势，第二段结尾很重要，不要晚节不保。倒装句在结尾补充再好不过。此句很万能，表明只有该积极事物让我们永远成功；
三：5—6句话，承上启下总结上文，两点建议，展望美好未来
From what have been discussed above, It admits of no doubt that in doing things whether great or small there are more or less difficulties, it is much better for one to persevere than to despair.
From 。。。。。。。。。。承上启下, 引起下文, 多达二十五个单词的总结句 表明无论做大事小事，难事容易事，都需要积极事物支持我们。
It is therefore, necessary that some effective measures are taken to cultivate confidence and to pursue the coming goals.
建议措施的总起句子, 引起下文，被动句子很有风采. On the one hand, we should be sensible to encourage ourselves to imagine about the colorful future. On the other hand, it is demanding for us to punish ourselves in certain ways if we fail to hold on to our dream.
结构很清晰,sensible 表明建议很理性, 从反方面再谈很辨证. However, it is easier said than done. Practice is the most important factor. Only when you pay attention to it can you make it better sooner or later. 这个闪光的万能句多达25个单词，强调实践的重要性.而且还有谚语,表明建议用于实践。
话题二：打败自我，不断改正自身缺陷吸收别人长处，完善自我，自信面对人生；
1Defeating ourselves or Defeating others
Defeating ourselves------------fight with our defects-------------------perfect ourselves------confident--------perseverant----------------have a better understanding of ourselves
As is vividly depicted in the picture, 描述图画. The most striking feature is 图画重点信息. There is no doubt that its symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration.
As is symbolically revealed in the set of drawings, the fact that 重复上面的图画信息 profoundly indicates that defeating oneself rather than the other competitors is momentous (重要的) and fundamental to any one who undertakes great deeds. You have to fight with your own shortcoming and perfect yourself as much as possible. It is defeating ourselves that keeps us continually doing something valuable and admirable in spite of difficulty and discouragement , that makes us still full of energy to face the coming challenges and competition and that offers us the foundation for the coming success. Unless we defeat ourselves, we will live a dull and depressing life and feel frustrated and humiliated, only to be eliminated. No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below. Many people who do not have faith in themselves always lose the match. Only by defeating ourselves can they make full use of their advantages and have a strong will to always challenge themselves.
From what have been discussed above, It admits of no doubt that in doing things whether great or small there are more or less difficulties, it is much better for one to have a better understanding of oneself. It is therefore, necessary that some effective measures are taken to make yourself more competitive in the society. On the one hand, we should be sensible to encourage ourselves to enrich our minds. On the other hand, it is demanding for us to be more perseverant. However, it is easier said than done. Practice is the most important factor. Only when you pay attention to it can you make it better sooner or later. 3. Team work 一个人盖楼房很辛苦, 很多人在一起建, 他们脸上有很多笑容. As is vividly depicted in the picture, 描述图画. The most striking feature is 图画重点信息. There is no doubt that its symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration. As is symbolically revealed in the set of drawings, the fact that 重复上面的图画信息 profoundly indicates that team work is momentous (重要的) and fundamental to any one who undertakes great deeds. Undoubtedly, it is team work that keeps us continually doing something valuable and admirable in spite of difficulty and discouragement , that makes us still full of energy to face the coming challenges and competition and that offers us the foundation for the coming success. Unless we cooperate sincerely, , we will live a dull and depressing life and feel frustrated and humiliated, only to be eliminated. No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below. A person who is assigned various jobs along the production lines will make a mess just because no one can be proficient in all the things. Only by cooperating with other people can you put your capacities into full play and can you be the winner in the society.
From what have been discussed above, It admits of no doubt that in doing things whether great or small there are more or less difficulties, it is much better for one to involve yourself into a team work. It is therefore, necessary that some effective measures are taken to make your team work more efficient. On the one hand, we should be sensible to be receptive to other people’s opinions and benefits. On the other hand, it is demanding for us to be active in taking a more tough job and always helpful and honest to other people. However, it is easier said than done. Practice is the most important factor. Only when you pay attention to it can you make it better sooner or later. 4. 对别人真诚，有礼貌，无私奉献，谦虚为人 Genuineness and cordiality are rewarding As is vividly depicted in the picture, a young man with a suitcase under his arm is stretches his hand to greet himself reflected in the mirror. The most striking feature is his image in the mirror is smiling at him sincerely. There is no doubt that its symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration.
As is symbolically revealed in the set of drawings, the fact that his smile can be reflected as tenderly as his real smile profoundly indicates that genuineness and cordiality are momentous (重要的) and fundamental to any one who undertakes great deeds. It is corporation with the team with great zeal that keeps us continually doing something valuable and admirable in spite of difficulty and discouragement, that makes us still full of energy to face the coming challenges and competition and that offers us the foundation for the coming success. Unless we are genuine to others, we will not be acknowledged, appreciated and respected by the others No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below. Many capable people who always care about his way of thinking will be living a dull, depressing life.Only by being genuine to others can they win other people’s trust and can they reward the support, sympathy .
From what have been discussed above, It admits of no doubt that in doing things whether great or small there are more or less difficulties, it is much better for one to cooperate with others with great zeal It is therefore, necessary that some effective measures are taken to make it work. On the one hand, we should be sensible to encourage ourselves to imagine everyone to be our friends not enemies. On the other hand, it is demanding for us to examine our behaviors to make sure they will not hurt others. However, it is easier said than done. Practice is the most important factor. Only when you pay attention to it can you make it better sooner or later. 5.选择工作，实事求是，量体裁衣，因地制宜 The fittest is the best
As is vividly depicted in the picture in the left picture a man A carrying a spanner. He seems very delighted and energetic although wet over with sweat. The most striking feature is……………..There is no doubt that its symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration. As is symbolically revealed in the set of drawings, the fact that the two man in different social positions have different attitudes toward life profoundly indicates that the fittest is the best to anyone who wants to enjoy their life. It is fitting the job that keeps us continually doing something valuable and admirable in spite of difficulty and discouragement , that makes us still full of energy to face the coming challenges and competition and that offers us the foundation for the coming success. Unless we choose the job that fit us, we will make a mess out of our life. No better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below. Many capable people who have the burning desire to win choose a admirable employment and suffer great illnesses.
From what have been discussed above, It admits of no doubt that in doing things whether great or small there are more or less difficulties, it is much better for one to choose job that can be done within his capability. It is therefore, necessary that some effective measures are taken to make it work. On the one hand, we should be sensible to find what we are skillful at and make a plan about the future. On the other hand, it is demanding for us to change to another job if it does not fit us.However, it is easier said than done. Practice is the most important factor. Only when you pay attention to it can you make it better sooner or later. |
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好象还行,谢谢了.