本人07年作文~自己的模版

我觉得模版还是有用的，自己的这个模版里面有各种句型和满分词汇，不足之处望大家指正！
今年的作文是关于合作的，核心词汇就是--cooperation。
Here is a lively and vivid cartoon we can see......(大体描述一下图片，这是个倒装句).what thedrawer intends to express is obvious enough :.....(写主题,主语从句)
Upon carefull thought,there are no obstacles for us to derive the profound meaning from the picture.The importance of......（核心词汇，名词） is manifest in various aspects of our life,as can be present below.It is well-known that high achievers own their success mostly to ...（核心词汇，与上一个核心词汇最好不要重复）Holding the opinion ...（一个句子，跟核心词汇有关），the youth will have better qualifications easily and be accepted by the society readily.（分词短语做壮语+同位语从句）It is a more harmonious circumstance that is indipensible to the growth of the youngsters.（强调句）As far as the businessmen are concerned,the value of ...(核心词汇，名词) is not impressive.A significant number of ...（胡扯就行，跟核心词汇有关） is intimately bound up with substancial benifits.Not everyone ,sad to say,sees it in perspective despite it is apparent and widely available.
As some ancients widely advised: ...（核心词汇）never makes you strong or handsome,but intelligent and enlightened.Take us for instance, ...（胡扯就行，强调没有怎样做就会很困难）seems to be a horrible monster that we can't deal with.However, ...(用核心词汇做一个分词短语做壮语），you will ultimately overcome it.It is high time that we ...(核心词汇有关的句子，高喊口号就行，虚拟语气）
完，这只是一种，也就是第三段需要举例子的，还有两种情况以后慢慢说。写作就是拼谁会的语法多，单词多。大家加油！