(转)【研英作文】写作高分佳句 Step By Step（31期）

听音乐能让我们觉得放松
4、study enable  us to  broad our horizen and  improve ourselves.
5\\ the  harder you try the more progress you made.
read more and  know more.

原帖由 你让我难过 于 2008-11-7 19:27 发表
听音乐能使人放松。

Feeling hungry enables he to go outside to buy someting to eat.

The harder you word,the more progress you make.
The more books we read,the more learned we become.

将he改为him

1、听音乐能使人感觉轻松
2、Having exercises enable us to be healthy.
3. The harder you work, the more process you make.
    The more book we read, the more learned we  become.

2、听音乐能够使我们感觉放松。

4、Regularly help others enable us to have a beaming mood.

5、The harder you work ,the more progress you make.
      The more books we read ,themore learned we become.

[s:2] [s:8] 造的好烂，哪位高人帮忙看看，哎

好东西哦！！

[s:8] [s:8] [s:8]

10楼的意思是他太饿使得他无法出去买吃的？
那应该是“Suffering hunger enable him to go out to buy something to eat!\"
是这样吧？第一次跟帖走，不太会诶！

原帖由 浅底翔鱼 于 2008-11-7 19:03 发表
My experiments in   daily  life   enable me  to   think  that   keeping   my  mind  is   a   very   right  way.

听音乐能使我们放松。


To take more excises  enable us who have devoded to taking the master to  keep good health.

the harder you  work,the more progress you make.

The more books we read,the more learned we become.



[ 本帖最后由 guoguogtj 于 2008-11-8 08:04 编辑 ]

原帖由 youhuadairen2 于 2008-11-7 22:20 发表
2、听音乐能够使我们感觉放松。

4、Regularly help others enable us to have a beaming mood.

5、The harder you work ,the more progress you make.
      The more books we read ,themore learned  ...

首先副词不能作主语呀

其次，俺不才，看不懂您要表达个啥意思呢？[s:10] [s:10]

听音乐可以使我们感觉放松