【英语作文】【造句+翻译比赛】（回帖者奖励20考元）【4月19日有更新】

cherishcll 发表于 2013-5-15 15:48
How do you think about getting the second chance to live?
There did have little regret and pities l ...

I get it！好久没碰英语，一个句子憋了好久

苹果爱桔子 发表于 2013-5-15 20:23
then the next sentence!!!you are the best!!

I do not want a chance to time travel, because the last second was the past,the next second will be the future. I just want to  live in this monent,and enjoy it.

我不想有穿越的机会，因为上一秒已是过去，下一秒将是未来。我只想活在当下，享受此刻。

I don't want to time travel,only to chreish the moment.

If there were second to live , I would make up some regrets , correct several choices , which bring about  great changes in my life . It's not I am not satisfied with my life but I hope to live my life to the fullest !

一定要好好感谢楼主呀

1032378055@qq.c 发表于 2013-5-16 11:18
If there were second to live , I would make up some regrets , correct several choices , which bring  ...

If there were time-travel , I would like to make some regrets , correcting several choices which had brought great changes in my life . It's not because of the satisfiiction with my life but I hope to live my life to the fullest !

come next time  and you can make great improvement!

I’d like to  the glorious age of Tang Dynasty , if so I needn't  to concerned about the pressure of means of livelihood ，as is known to all , during which time peoples' life is rather rich . In that condition I am able to quest my senior needs rather than take account of the  pecuniary condition  when  it comes to make choices . Frankly speaking , it’s real-life that restrict human beings to exert our potential to the fullest .

嫒々梦 发表于 2013-5-14 18:40
it is the choice you made that shapes you life.hence i have no time to look back except pay attentio ...

“particapation“” should spell “participation”。

好的，多看看，谢谢啦

1032378055@qq.c 发表于 2013-5-16 22:13
I’d like to  the glorious age of Tang Dynasty , if so I needn't  to concerned about the pressure of ...

第一句的"I’d like to  the glorious age of Tang Dynasty"里to应该去掉，I needn't  to concerned about里concern不应该用ed结尾，还有其他的

尝试修改自己写的句子也可以让作文有很大提高的哟，你要修改一下吗？