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我布置了一篇作文Let the classics be classics感兴趣的同学可以来试试

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 楼主| virgoma 发表于 14-5-4 12:07:34 | 只看该作者
Blair 发表于 14-4-30 10:11
能提供个范文参考一下吗?
另外,你的头像很不错

谢谢你夸奖我的头像,这里有一个范文供参考,不过如果提交的作文不要抄袭哦,我能检测出来的Let the classics be classics  
In today's rapid economic development of the society, many people pursuit
of fashion and forgotten classics. For example, now many young people like
listening to pop music rarely go to listen to some classical music, buy trendy
clothing and paid little attention to the classic traditional costumes.  
Different people have different opinions to this topic. On the one hand,
some people think that some classic is obsolete, no longer the fresh things, so
they stopped to listen to and attention. On the other hand, some people think
that the classic is classic, because they stand the test of time, they represent
the wisdom of the past. Therefore, no matter in which era, we should treasure
them and continue to go down, our generation is no exception.  
In my opinion, I think that as the generation of the 21st century we can't
forget the classics, because it is the soul of our Chinese nation and essence. For
example, the ancient Confucian culture, traditional etiquette, festivals and
customs, even the name of the classic songs, etc. , they are all we should
inheritance and carry forward the classic. It focus on the ancestors wisdom and
experience of the predecessors, these are our generation and the children
should learn. At the same time, we should also reflect on, why can "pop classical
crowded to one side "? Need to think about how to make the classical cultural
values embodied in our contemporary life, guide people approached the classic,
love classic, reading a classic.  
As we all know, classic the cultural spirit of wealth, of course, not only is a
kind of knowledge about the past experience, classic is not rigid, it needs to
inject new vitality. So, classic to keep vitality, deeply contemporary social life, it
also must be taken to the contemporary form of full of vitality. Should we need
to do today is, as far as possible in a wide variety of cultural and artistic means
and manner, in the form of the spirit of innovation, innovation, to interpret the
classic, classic, perhaps in so doing, the classic can be eternal and immortality,
and makes the classical heritage.
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Blair 发表于 14-5-7 11:58:59 | 只看该作者
virgoma 发表于 14-5-4 12:07
谢谢你夸奖我的头像,这里有一个范文供参考,不过如果提交的作文不要抄袭哦,我能检测出来的Let th ...

这范文好高大上
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Blair 发表于 14-5-7 15:47:15 | 只看该作者
virgoma 发表于 14-5-4 12:07
谢谢你夸奖我的头像,这里有一个范文供参考,不过如果提交的作文不要抄袭哦,我能检测出来的Let th ...

这篇文章是哪个老师的范文?我仔细研究了一下,发现这篇文章用到的词汇是蛮眩目,好些生单词可以借机学习一下。但是语句不是很通,尤其是第二段,感觉像是用翻译工具直接中译英的。
比如 1。On the one hand, some people think that some classic is obsolete, no longer the fresh things, so they stopped to listen to and attention. 我觉得应该是so they stopped to listen to and pay attention to.
2. they are all we should inheritance and carry forward the classic,应该是they are all we should inherit
3. Should we need to do today is, as far as possible in a wide variety of cultural and artistic means and manner, in the form of the spirit of innovation, innovation, to interpret the classic, classic, perhaps in so doing, the classic can be eternal and immortality, and makes the classical heritage. 看不太懂。 我试着重写了一遍,what we need to do today is, developing the spirit of innovation in a wide variety of methods and manners for cultural and art. If we use innovation to interpret classic, the classic can be eternal and immortality, which makes the classical heritage.

可以学习的生单词:
trendy时髦的
Obsolete: 废弃的陈腐的
Essence:精髓,实质
Confucian culture:儒家文化
Traditional Etiquette: 传统礼节
Ancestor:祖先
Predecessor: 先驱
Contemporary:同时代的人/东西,同一时期的
Rigid严格的
Vitality:活力生命力
Embody:体现,使具体化
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 楼主| virgoma 发表于 14-5-8 16:13:56 | 只看该作者
Blair 发表于 14-5-7 15:47
这篇文章是哪个老师的范文?我仔细研究了一下,发现这篇文章用到的词汇是蛮眩目,好些生单词可以借机学习 ...

这篇范文是一个网友写的,给大家学习参考一下  。源地址:http://zhidao.baidu.com/link?url ... elzYQIO-ujk5W-BQVs_

你发现的不错,里面的确有些语法问题,大家一起讨论。
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