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张剑 曾鸣《考研英语最后冲刺8套题》答疑专贴(已经开始作文修改了)

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我就是神 发表于 09-1-2 12:49:10 | 只看该作者

谢谢老师的批改

As is shown in the pictures, a harmonious atmosphere is filled with three generations. A father gives grandfather a chicken joyfully; the grandfather sends the chicken to his grandson with no hesitate instead. To the surprise, the son runs to his father and gives the delicious to the father instead of eating it himself. Seeing this situation, both the father and the grandfather laugh happily.

What an admirable family filled with love and respect it is! Loving and respecting parents, in this world, which people are addicted to pursue money and benefits only, is invaluable to educate our next generation. Respecting parents is can be said the moral standard of measuring social civilization. The father set an example in front of his son, so as to educate his son to love the old by action rather saying. It is the best way that to cultivate people’s awareness of respecting the old rather than logo all around the world. To the contrary, were people did not respect their parents not only the patents break heart, but also their behaviors must be blamed.

As far as I am concerned, no loving parents, no respecting by other people. What is the most important thing you ought to be concerned about in your life is how to be responsible and heart-loving man, which is the priority while other thing like good job hunting is based on those moral standards to pursue. Only by raising awareness of the important of respecting and loving parents can our society be made a great progress.
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我就是神 发表于 09-1-2 12:50:50 | 只看该作者

同样要谢谢老师的及时批改,谢谢了

The two pictures vividly depict a man whose different attitudes towards various helps giving me. Seeing a rescue-money, he runs straightly to the money neglecting the official. The second picture shows that a technologist gives him a book including sufficient experiences on how to get rid of poverty and further become the rich, however, he refuses to accept it with the posture of waving his hand and head just like an electricity fan.

What a worthy deep thinking and typical phenomenon in our country! To some extent, the majority of people hold this idea that only gaining without endeavor. In the real world, there is no success without by plans taking to achieve their great goals. For instance, YaoMing, the famous basketball player all over the world, practices everyday with no excuse like I am exhausted so as to take a rest. Even when he got hurt in his leg, he firmly insisted on practicing his arm. Had he only advantageous body with no industrious heart, he would never become one of the best player in the world.

It is high time to promote the spirit of fighting for their destiny. No painstaking, no development. Social development mainly lies in the level of people’s creation and industry. Being a college student, what we ought to care about is how to accomplish a assignment perfectly rather than copy other’s fruits.
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chenyucsy 发表于 09-1-2 14:16:51 | 只看该作者
跟着学习下
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找着找着 发表于 09-1-2 18:57:51 | 只看该作者

谢谢老师

模拟3
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am a student in Beijing university. I am now writing this letter to ask for some information about continuing my graduate study at your school.
I major in bridge design, in addition to required courses of my major, I take an active part in school life. I shall be obliged if you kindly tell me what is need to offer to apply for your university. And I want to know how many overseas students in your school. My complete resume is attached.
Thanks for your kind consideration and I look forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely
Li Ming

So vivid and thought-provoking is this extraordinary picture that we are tempted to take another close look and we find a boy’s hand in a computer screen. He need someone who can help him to far away Net surf. It can easily be seen that it is dangerous and harmful get into habit to Net.
There are many reasons to explain that drown in the web sea is harmful and the following are the typical ones. The first reason is that if a man takes a lot of time in Internet, he have no energy to do other things. It will result in he can’t pass exams. The second reason is that because some people get into the habit to Net, he can’t tell which is true between real word and Net word.
According is imperative for us to take concerned measures. First and foremost it is essential that the rules should be worked out to limit the young people to enter the public Net-bar. In addition, we should improve the awareness of people that it is important to have a good Net environment. The last but not the least the media should play a positive role in helping people have other recreation.
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生于2008 发表于 09-1-2 19:52:52 | 只看该作者
谢谢楼主
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mercury文君 发表于 09-1-2 23:12:06 | 只看该作者
thank you !
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mercury文君 发表于 09-1-2 23:19:26 | 只看该作者

谢谢楼主

thank you !
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mercury文君 发表于 09-1-3 00:00:02 | 只看该作者

谢谢老师批改

模拟七
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to recommend my foreign teacher, Bernard E.Hill, for your positon which is advertised in your website.

There are several reasons why I reconmmend him. First of all, as his student, I am confidence of his teaching English abilities and he is greatly responsible for everthing which he does. What’s more, he possesses rich experience and special methods on teaching English. In additon, he is a English man and speak oral English standards. So I think he is the person who you are looking for.

Thank you for your consideration. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon..

Yours sincerely,
Li Ming


As is symbolically depicted in the picture, a man, standing on the top of a stack of inferior product, is blowing a balloon named advertisement. The sight brings about insight into the issue of false advertisement for low-qulify products among people who are concerned about the problem.

Under current circumstances where the rapid and remarkable technology reform brings new concepts into people’s life, perhaps no changes has characterized the past decade than that of advertising for products. It is generally acknowledged that the manufacturers do more advertisement for products,especially defective products. As the increase of people are pleasure to shopping and purchase cheap goods, the manufacturers whose products are unqulified and less famous are willing to spend more money on advertising to attract consumers’ attention. As a result, due to these products, the customers become ill. The milk of SanLu can best exemplify the view mentioned above. As is often reported by media, there are more unreal advertisement in our daily life.

From my perspective, it is imperative for us to take effictive measures. On the one hand, the authorities should make more strict laws and regulations to regulate the advertisment. On the other hand, customers should improve the awareness of d distinguishing false advertisement. Only in this way can we keep health and enjoy happy life.
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juventino 发表于 09-1-3 00:36:47 | 只看该作者
非常感谢你的辛苦劳动
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shiney1121 发表于 09-1-3 01:20:59 | 只看该作者
很好的创意!
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