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As is vividly depicted in the above cartoon, a well suited gentleman, sitting before a desk, is doing his accomplishment, through tearing, coping and pasting material from others, and thinking, without feeling ashamed that what is yours is mine as well.
The messages which the cartoon conveys are rather clear. Obviously, the writer is there to call for academic honesty. There are a handful of, so called, schoolar in our society who simply do his research without any investation and just steal his counterpart\'s accomplishment like what the above cartoon indicates. It is needless to say that this kind of schoolars has lost their academic honesty.
In the building of creative nation, science and technology innovation is undoubtedly the most important aspect. And it should be the academic honesty, I think, that owns the most important place in the innovation of science and technology. Only be honest in research, can we obtain concrete advance. And without it, we would finally get nothing. So, in one word, let us be honest  in doing research

As is vividly depicted in the above cartoon, a well suited gentleman, sitting before a desk, is doing his accomplishment, through tearing, coping and pasting material from others, and thinking, without feeling ashamed that what is yours is mine as well.
     The messages which the cartoon conveys are rather clear. Obviously, the writer is there to call for academic honesty. There are a handful of, so called, schoolar in our society who simply do his research without any investation and just steal his counterpart\'s accomplishment like what the above cartoon indicates. It is needless to say that this kind of schoolars has lost their academic honesty.
     In the building of creative nation, science and technology innovation is undoubtedly the most important aspect. And it should be the academic honesty, I think, that owns the most important place in the innovation of science and technology. Only be honest in research, can we obtain concrete advance. And without it, we would finally get nothing. So, in one word, let us be honest  in doing research.

原帖由 liyangqin 于 2009-1-5 17:56 发表
As is vividly depicted in the above cartoon, a well suited gentleman, sitting before a desk, is doing his accomplishment, through tearing, coping and pasting material from others, and thinking, w ...

As is vividly depicted in the above cartoon, a well suited gentleman, sitting before a desk, is doing his accomplishment, through tearing, coping and pasting material from others, and thinking, without feeling ashamed that what is yours is mine as well.

The messages which the cartoon conveys are rather clear. Obviously, the writer is there to call for academic honesty. There are a handful of, so called, schoolar (拼写错误+复数形式scholars) in our society who simply do his research without any investation (拼写错误investigation) and just steal his counterpart\'s accomplishment like what the above cartoon indicates. It is needless to say that this kind of schoolars (拼写错误scholars) has (have) lost their academic honesty.

In the building of creative nation, science and technology innovation is undoubtedly the most important aspect. And it should be the academic honesty, I think, that owns the most important place in the innovation of science and technology. Only be honest in research, can we obtain concrete advance. And without it, we would finally get nothing. So, in one word, let us be honest in doing research.

评析：
本文正确把握了图画的寓意，文章内容切合题意，并且涵盖了题目中的信息要点。
文章思路清晰，清楚地表达了其内涵。主题思想鲜明，论述的层次清晰严谨。
句子大都符合语法规范，句式上具有多样性。
评分：15分


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原帖由 s03211076 于 2009-1-6 15:54 发表
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老师，你好，我不是你的会员，麻烦你花几分钟时间帮我看看好吗？我是在家考研的，碰到的困难也很多，就麻烦你一下，可以吗？花不了你多长时间的，我只是想看看一下自己还存在哪些不足，多谢了，请您破一次例可以吗？

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