首段:
This is an interesting and thought-provoking picture. As is vividly depicted in the picture, 描述图片表面内容(现象)。Simply designed as it is, the symbolic meaning that the picture conveys is deep and profound. The drawer of the picture might want to tell us that 描述图片的隐含内容(本质)。To illustrate and back up my viewpoint, I would like to take 举例(人或物或其它),解释一下你所说的人或物(插入语,得高分用的),for an example
中段:
自己写一些论据及(生活)实例
末段:
Therefore, building up a/an 观点、精神 towards …… is of great significance both to …… , because only in this way, 倒装句1 and only in this way, 倒装句2.
(说明:最后虽然是一个自然段,但实际上就是一个很长的句子!这样符合短句拉长得高分的原则!而且用到了倒装,只要没有语法错误,一定会给老师留下很好的结尾印象!)
下面我就用此模版将我09年的考研英语作文用此模版套一遍!(带下划线的为需要修改的地方,其它是不要变的模版,下同)
This is an interesting and thought-provoking picture. As is vividly depicted in the picture,around sit a lot of people and all of them are addicted into computers without paying attention to others. Simply designed as it is, the symbolic meaning that the picture conveys is deep and profound. The drawer of the picture might want to tell us that the network seems to make us get near and near with each other but in fact, it gets us to become far away from each other. To illustrate and back up my viewpoint, I would like to take a case, which I met and felt in my life a few months ago,for an example.
中段主要举个例子叙述下就OK啦!
Therefore, building up a correct attitude towards the network is of great significance both to our friends and to ourselves, because only in this way, can we use the network correctly and properly and only in this way, will the correct attitude lead to harmonious intercourse and long-term friendship among people.
首段:
This is an interesting and thought-provoking picture. As is vividly depicted in the picture,……. Simply designed as it is, the symbolic meaning that the picture conveys is deep and profound. The drawer of the picture might want to tell us that ……. To illustrate and back up my viewpoint, I would like to take Duli,the owner of 19th Gold Medal in China,for an example.
中段可用句子(短语):
(1) It means much more to her who is under great pressure than to us who are in much comforts.
(2) When confronted with fierce competition, she nanaged to employ her knowledge, skills and experience to confront with her rivals.
末段:
Therefore, building up a combatant spirit towards difficulties and frustrations is of great significance both to a nation and to a country, because only in this way, can we difeat these difficulties and frustrations and only in this way, will the spirit lead to lasting success and prosperity of our deeds and undertakings.
2、北京奥运:
可以涉及到的漫画内容:
世界交往、和谐世界(和谐社会)、国家民族、奥运、体育
首段:
This is an interesting and thought-provoking picture. As is vividly depicted in the picture,……. Simply designed as it is, the symbolic meaning that the picture conveys is deep and profound. The drawer of the picture might want to tell us that ……. To illustrate and back up my viewpoint, I would like to take the Beijing Olympics, the century dream of our Chinese people, for an example.
中段可用句子(短语):
(1) to appreciate the rich cultural deposits of China and employ the environment of Beijing, clean, tidy and with good circulation of air.
(2) We should put forward talents exchange, attach importance to cultivating talents and prvent and avoid brain drain.
末段(由北京奥运到和谐世界)
Therefore, building up a harmonious attitude towards the world is of great significance both to a nation and to an individual, because only in this way, can we live a vigorous, colorful and dynamic life and only in this way, will harmony lead to lasting peace and prosperity of the world.
3、汶川地震
可以涉及到的漫画内容:
民族精神、民族活力、正确价值观(可举例谭千秋等)
首段:
This is an interesting and thought-provoking picture. As is vividly depicted in the picture,……. Simply designed as it is, the symbolic meaning that the picture conveys is deep and profound. The drawer of the picture might want to tell us that ……. To illustrate and back up my viewpoint, I would like to take Tan Qianqiu, a great teacher in China, for an example.
中段可用句子
再大的灾难除以13亿都会变得微不足道;再小的善心乘以13亿都会变成爱的海洋。
——温总理
(同学们可以找老师用最佳的方式翻译!)
末段
Therefore, building up an indomitable spirit is of great significance both to a nation and to an individual, because only in this way, can we defeat tremendous disasters and gigantic frustrations and only in this way, will the spirit lead to lasting success and prosperity of our country and nation.