sorry,I forgot to glance over the front page ,and I have just seen the headline on it.
我和我的小伙伴都惊呆了。
I and my little good buddies were dumbed when we saw a boy could danced like Michael Jackson on a TV show,especially when
he said "Oh" ,that was cool~over and out.
Rainbow_V 发表于 2013-7-20 20:52
sorry,I forgot to glance over the front page ,and I have just seen the headline on it.
我和我的小 ...
1.当双主语是,I总是放在后面的,所以是my buddies and I.
2.when we saw a boy could danced like Michael Jackson 中,a boy后应该要有who做定语从句的主语,这样才语法正确,其次是情态动词后应该是动词原形dance
3.that引导从句,若是在“,”之后,则应该替换成which。
苹果爱桔子 发表于 2013-7-21 12:36
1.当双主语是,I总是放在后面的,所以是my buddies and I.
2.when we saw a boy could danced like Mich ...
感谢版主热情洋溢的慷慨解说和积分赠送[r:17],距离我可以和别人聊天的积分要求还差12分?
再次,感谢版主的精心点评,个人认为此贴必火,请原谅我未用英文表达我的激动的心情
最后,关于我的造句,难道没有没有一点笑点么,哎呦不错哦
at last,I wanna...哎?麦克风有问题啊(嘭嘭....zz...)好了,不好意思哈。
哎?说到哪了,哦,关于那一句,是不是如果我想要说“that was cool”前面要用句号结尾,because I think it's really cool。[r:24]