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【英语作文】【造句+翻译比赛】(回帖者奖励20考元)【4月19日有更新】

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wzb_seu007 发表于 13-5-14 10:18:19 | 只看该作者
how do you think about getting the second chance to live?

When people ask God to give them a sign , they’re often at a standstill, a fork in the road, paralyzed in a critical moment of existential ambivalence.I prefer to listen to my own heart for guidance,take what comes.

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wzb_seu007 发表于 13-5-14 10:23:37 | 只看该作者
I would like to recommend the next topic as patience and time or what do you think about patience and time.

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 楼主| 苹果爱桔子 发表于 13-5-14 11:28:33 | 只看该作者
bai_2857 发表于 2013-5-14 09:31
how do you think about getting the second chance to live?

  Everyone gets an opportunity to chang ...

yes, i agree with your opinion. Making clear what i want is very important, which will guide me the way to think, to act, and to became the true self.

anyway, your sentences is not one, which consist a paragraphO(∩_∩)O
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 楼主| 苹果爱桔子 发表于 13-5-14 11:32:11 | 只看该作者
wzb_seu007 发表于 2013-5-14 10:18
how do you think about getting the second chance to live?

When people ask God to give them a sign ...

it is just like "we can only live once, for which we should make full use of it".

And, your paragraph is not "one sentence"O(∩_∩)O
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 楼主| 苹果爱桔子 发表于 13-5-14 11:36:49 | 只看该作者
wzb_seu007 发表于 2013-5-14 10:23
I would like to recommend the next topic as patience and time or what do you think about patience an ...

louis said that "如果你可以穿越,你想穿越到哪里去“can be the next sentence yesterday. So your one might be the 4th sentence, is it ok?

thank you for your recommending!!!you are the first one who give me the sentence actively, thanks a lot!
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嫒々梦 发表于 13-5-14 18:40:38 | 只看该作者
it is the choice you made that shapes you life.hence i have no time to look back except pay attention to present choice.      功力太浅               啊啊啊。。。。。。

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syn90 发表于 13-5-15 11:14:50 来自手机设备或APP | 只看该作者
sometimes i hope there is a second life,but,after a little time gone,i forgot the days'dream.

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cherishcll 发表于 13-5-15 15:48:58 | 只看该作者
How do you think about getting the second chance to live?
There did have little regret and pities lefted in those old days, if i get the second chance to live i wanna be a girl, for i want to expirence my life and the world in a sharply different way.

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 楼主| 苹果爱桔子 发表于 13-5-15 20:18:10 | 只看该作者
cherishcll 发表于 2013-5-15 15:48
How do you think about getting the second chance to live?
There did have little regret and pities l ...

regrets
逗号后面用一个“and"连接肿么样?wanna口语化的语言不太适合在写作中出现,经历我的生活和世界也许可以用另外的搭配,用experience好像并不是习惯搭配(一己之见啊)

thanks for your coming,i value it very much!!

come next time !!
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 楼主| 苹果爱桔子 发表于 13-5-15 20:23:47 | 只看该作者
then the next sentence!!!you are the best!!


如果你可以穿越,你最想穿越到哪里,为什么?

If you would be allowed  time-travel,  where and when you would like to go,please tell us the reason you think of.


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