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【英语作文】【造句+翻译比赛】(回帖者奖励20考元)【4月19日有更新】

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cherishcll 发表于 13-5-15 20:44:42 | 只看该作者
cherishcll 发表于 2013-5-15 15:48
How do you think about getting the second chance to live?
There did have little regret and pities l ...

I get it!好久没碰英语,一个句子憋了好久
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louis21 发表于 13-5-15 21:14:56 | 只看该作者
苹果爱桔子 发表于 2013-5-15 20:23
then the next sentence!!!you are the best!!


I do not want a chance to time travel, because the last second was the past,the next second will be the future. I just want to  live in this monent,and enjoy it.

我不想有穿越的机会,因为上一秒已是过去,下一秒将是未来。我只想活在当下,享受此刻。

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mmyymm 发表于 13-5-15 22:19:08 | 只看该作者
I don't want to time travel,only to chreish the moment.

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1032378055@qq.c 发表于 13-5-16 11:18:45 | 只看该作者
If there were second to live , I would make up some regrets , correct several choices , which bring about  great changes in my life . It's not I am not satisfied with my life but I hope to live my life to the fullest !

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fivemore 发表于 13-5-16 13:43:17 | 只看该作者
一定要好好感谢楼主呀

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 楼主| 苹果爱桔子 发表于 13-5-16 21:50:17 | 只看该作者
1032378055@qq.c 发表于 2013-5-16 11:18
If there were second to live , I would make up some regrets , correct several choices , which bring  ...

If there were time-travel , I would like to make some regrets , correcting several choices which had brought great changes in my life . It's not because of the satisfiiction with my life but I hope to live my life to the fullest !

come next time  and you can make great improvement!
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1032378055@qq.c 发表于 13-5-16 22:13:52 | 只看该作者
I’d like to  the glorious age of Tang Dynasty , if so I needn't  to concerned about the pressure of means of livelihood ,as is known to all , during which time peoples' life is rather rich . In that condition I am able to quest my senior needs rather than take account of the  pecuniary condition  when  it comes to make choices . Frankly speaking , it’s real-life that restrict human beings to exert our potential to the fullest .

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williamliao 发表于 13-5-16 22:17:25 | 只看该作者
嫒々梦 发表于 2013-5-14 18:40
it is the choice you made that shapes you life.hence i have no time to look back except pay attentio ...

“particapation“” should spell “participation”。

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MY6 发表于 13-5-16 22:30:03 | 只看该作者
好的,多看看,谢谢啦

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 楼主| 苹果爱桔子 发表于 13-5-16 22:39:02 | 只看该作者
1032378055@qq.c 发表于 2013-5-16 22:13
I’d like to  the glorious age of Tang Dynasty , if so I needn't  to concerned about the pressure of ...

第一句的"I’d like to  the glorious age of Tang Dynasty"里to应该去掉,I needn't  to concerned about里concern不应该用ed结尾,还有其他的

尝试修改自己写的句子也可以让作文有很大提高的哟,你要修改一下吗?
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