shanweibrother 发表于 2013-10-11 23:40
as a freshman,what you ask is not fit for me that i have not made a plan for mysrlf bef ...
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as a freshman,what you asked is not fit for(for可以不用) me that(这里的that可以改为because之类的表原因的词语) i have not made a plan for mysrlf before,and myy english is poor(句号)
As we are both developing countries, having a common aspiration in improving the standard of life of our peoples, I look forward, in the next few days, to the opportunity of learning something from your endeavors and experience in promoting economic and social development in the service of your people.