张剑 曾鸣《考研英语最后冲刺8套题》答疑专贴（已经开始作文修改了）

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Kfzhou:

第二套作文
Dear Bob,
I am very happy to know that you are going to visit me this holiday. I miss you very much and I am eager to see you soon. When I told (主句和从句时态保持一致tell) this good news to my parents, they both welcome you warmly and are looking forward for (to) your arrival.
My hometown Beijing is a beautiful city which is famous for her long history and modernization in the world. I plan to show you around this city. We will go to the Great Wall, (the) Forbidden City, (the) Summer Palace, (the) Bird’s Nest and (the) Water Cube. My parents will cook delicious Chinese food for you. We hope you can enjoy everyday with us.
Give my best wishes to your parents. I am looking forward to see (seeing) you!

Yours sincerely
Li Ming

评析：
本文涵盖了要求的信息点，语言得体，结构清晰，句式错误较少。
评分：8分


In the picture, there are two persons climbing the knowledge building. One is climbing by a ladder which is already set by the formers, (此处重点是“已经安排好了”而非是“某人”安排的，故修改为：which has been set) while the other one is climbing only by a rope through self-study (rope与self-study的关系没有弄清楚，修改为：which symbolizes self-study). And the final goals are quite different, too. The first-mentioned man aims at high diploma, by contrast, the other aims at the genuine ability and knowledge.

We can draw several implications from this picture. First, it is obviously that climbing a ladder is safer and easier than climbing a rope. This means that learning is much easier by taking a formal education than self-education. However, through the hard self-study journey, one can develop the habit of independent thinking, which is very important in one’s life. Besides, it also shows that high diploma doesn’t mean high ability. There are too many people pursuit (who pursue) the high diploma rather than real ability. They would find them (themselves) wrong when they join in the competitive society.

As we students, we should pay more attention to the genuine ability. Without the real ability, we can’t take the pace of the time being (短语用错了keep pace with the times).

评析：
本文正确阐述了图画的内涵，语言较为流畅，段落结构比较有条理，句式使用有变换，个别地方的表述有问题望引起注意。
评分：14分


[三个问题]希望您能解答：
1、请问一般英文中每段前空几个字母？首段空几个格，书信和其他在段首格式上是一样的吗？

空几个字母都行，一般空4个字母。书信有两种，一种是正文每段都空4个字母，一种是正文开头不缩进。
2、大作文要不要写标题？格式是怎样的？谢谢！

不用写。
3、大小作文的字数要求问题：小作文要求不少于100，那一般写多少为好；大作文是160——200，那写多少为好呢？

小作文少于或等于90个词就开始扣分，大作文最少不能少于160词，不要超过200词，在其范围之内都好。不用写太多，写多了老师也不会都看的。

Kfzhou:

第二套作文
Dear Bob,
I am very happy to know that you are going to visit me this holiday. I miss you very much and I am eager to see you soon. When I told (主句和从句时态保持一致tell) this good news to my parents, they both welcome you warmly and are looking forward for (to) your arrival.
My hometown Beijing is a beautiful city which is famous for her long history and modernization in the world. I plan to show you around this city. We will go to the Great Wall, (the) Forbidden City, (the) Summer Palace, (the) Bird’s Nest and (the) Water Cube. My parents will cook delicious Chinese food for you. We hope you can enjoy everyday with us.
Give my best wishes to your parents. I am looking forward to see (seeing) you!

Yours sincerely
Li Ming

评析：
本文涵盖了要求的信息点，语言得体，结构清晰，句式错误较少。
评分：8分


In the picture, there are two persons climbing the knowledge building. One is climbing by a ladder which is already set by the formers, (此处重点是“已经安排好了”而非是“某人”安排的，故修改为：which has been set) while the other one is climbing only by a rope through self-study (rope与self-study的关系没有弄清楚，修改为：which symbolizes self-study). And the final goals are quite different, too. The first-mentioned man aims at high diploma, by contrast, the other aims at the genuine ability and knowledge.

We can draw several implications from this picture. First, it is obviously that climbing a ladder is safer and easier than climbing a rope. This means that learning is much easier by taking a formal education than self-education. However, through the hard self-study journey, one can develop the habit of independent thinking, which is very important in one’s life. Besides, it also shows that high diploma doesn’t mean high ability. There are too many people pursuit (who pursue) the high diploma rather than real ability. They would find them (themselves) wrong when they join in the competitive society.

As we students, we should pay more attention to the genuine ability. Without the real ability, we can’t take the pace of the time being (短语用错了keep pace with the times).

评析：
本文正确阐述了图画的内涵，语言较为流畅，段落结构比较有条理，句式使用有变换，个别地方的表述有问题望引起注意。
评分：14分


[三个问题]希望您能解答：
1、请问一般英文中每段前空几个字母？首段空几个格，书信和其他在段首格式上是一样的吗？

空几个字母都行，一般空4个字母。书信有两种，一种是正文每段都空4个字母，一种是正文开头不缩进。
2、大作文要不要写标题？格式是怎样的？谢谢！

不用写。
3、大小作文的字数要求问题：小作文要求不少于100，那一般写多少为好；大作文是160——200，那写多少为好呢？

小作文少于或等于90个词就开始扣分，大作文最少不能少于160词，不要超过200词，在其范围之内都好。不用写太多，写多了老师也不会都看的。

第三套作文

Dear Sir or Madam,
I am an undergraduate student from Tsinghua University. I want to continue my study at your university after I graduate in July the (去掉the) next year. I am writing to you to ask for relevant information.
First, my major is nuclear engineering, and I want to know the advantage of your university on this subject. Besides, if you could give me some information about the professors in the field in your university, it would be highly appreciated. Finally, I also want to know the tuition.
I am looking forward for (to) your letter.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming

评析：
本文是一封询问信。文章用语较为得体，段落结构比较明晰，文中的语法、用词错误较少。但是文章句子在形式上的变换相对较少。
评分：9分

It is widely considered that the problem of internet addiction is increasingly serious. This is most vividly illustrated in the above picture. It shows that a person is getting drowned in the web sea, with his struggling hand still visible.

The painter wants to tell us that the web is not always benefitable (用词错误，改为：beneficial). Sometimes it may ruin us when (if) we do not use it reasonable （reasonably）. The web must be one thing that modern people can’t live without it. Some people take the internet addiction. (句子不连贯，修改为：Nowadays modern people become gradually rely on the Internet, and some of them are even addicted to the net) This phenomenon is very popular among the young, especially among the students who are still study in middle school (简单表达为：the middle school students). When getting in (on) the internet, the students forget everything else, such as sleep (sleeping), eating and even of (去掉of) study (studying). They may also think it in class, while others (指代不明 other students) are listening.

We can get information from the web, but to be sure you can use it reasonable (句子结构错误，修改为：We should make a reasonable use of Internet, for instance, getting useful information); otherwise, we will be drowned in the web sea that we can not help ourselves(and couldn’t help ourselves out).

评析：
本文对图画内涵的理解正确，并较为清晰地描述了图片和阐述寓意，文章框架结构比较有条理，句式有变换。但是文中句子错误较多，可见作者的语法知识掌握的不牢固，望在此方面多努力！
评分：11分

具体怎么弄呢？怎么没看明白？？

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