grapeonly 发表于 2013-8-14 12:50
what do you think about getting the second chance to live?
If I have a second chance ,the f ...
what do you think about getting the second chance to live?
If I have a second chance ,the first thing I have to do is to study harder ,try my best to master the knowledge and manage to entrance the university that I desaire.The second thing is to know him earlier ,get married and buy a big house before 2006 in Beijing:)
However,you never turn the clock back.The only thing I can do is to save time,make myself strong,and go for the new life:)
说到表达,你是可以完全用英语表达自己观点的类型,这样挺好的,即应用!
其次是,manage to可以修改成'succeed to entre the', 可能你现在还不太习惯键盘敲英语,所以有一个拼写错误。
最后,表达有点单一化,你用的句子结构在三句中都相同,这个如果在口语中是没有问题的,但是写作中是大忌,句式多样化很重要,还有一点是里面用的词都是我认识的
但是最最重要的是你来参加句子活动,grape童鞋,偶灰常高兴!!!要再来哟!!!
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