【英语作文】【造句+翻译比赛】（回帖者奖励20考元）【4月19日有更新】

What is a tragedy?
Tragedy now seems keeping away from us all,but sudden things putting us in a deepen trap is always existing.Nobody could live a smoother life than any other ones.Thus we're facing so-called "tragedy" every minute of lives ,even if it hides behind us,chasing us ,never flow away.

不好意思啊，有点语法错误，没仔细检查

hm199304 发表于 2013-11-9 17:09
What is a tragedy?
Tragedy now seems keeping away from us all,but sudden things putting us in a dee ...

What is a tragedy?
Tragedy now seems keeping away from us all,but sudden things putting us in a deepen trap is always existing.
首先，第一步要把句子写顺，不要强求结构复杂的句子。第一句基本的主谓结构以及句子的多主谓完全把你的句子毁掉了。

Nobody could live a smoother life than any other ones.
要么你就any others 要么就antone else
Thus we're facing so-called "tragedy【务必请特指。要加the，或者加复数】" every minute of lives ,even if it hides behind us,chasing us ,never flow away.

语序最好颠倒一下，应该说【Though ······，we are facing······】

继续加油吧！！

11 10 句子活动：
请翻译：

It is not clear how many colleges and universities plan to give out iphone and ipods this fall; officials at Apple were unwilling to talk about the subject and said that they would not leak any insititution's plans.

You are so amazing in speaking English ,even though I always think that English just a language,without it ,we will miss many beautiful things.Just learn it well together!

It is not clear how many colleges and universities plan to give out iphone and ipods this fall; officials at Apple were unwilling to talk about the subject and said that they would not leak any insititution's plans.

翻译：有多少学院和大学计划在这个秋天发放爱疯手机和爱派德平板电脑还不清楚（应该是ipad吧？没听说过优惠ipod）；苹果官方不愿意谈论这个话题，并说他们将不会透漏任何机构的计划。

五妖妖 发表于 2013-11-11 18:08
It is not clear how many colleges and universities plan to give out iphone and ipods this fall; offi ...

参考答案：
我们不确定今年秋季将有多少高校计划向学生发放iPhone手机和iPod播放器。苹果公司的官员不愿意谈论这个话题，他们表示不想透露任何机构的计划。

11 11 翻译：

What distinguishes a depression from a harsh recession is paralyzing fear—fear of the unknown so great that it causes consumers, businesses, and investors to retreat and panic.

What distinguishes a depression from a harsh recession is paralyzing fear—fear of the unknown so great that it causes consumers, businesses, and investors to retreat and panic.

把萎靡不振的精神和残酷的经济衰退两者区别开来的是那种如瘫痪般的恐惧——这种对未知的恐惧是那么强烈，导致了顾客，商人和投资者纷纷撤退和恐慌。


继续走起~

五妖妖 发表于 2013-11-11 18:30
What distinguishes a depression from a harsh recession is paralyzing fear—fear of the unknown so gr ...

你的主语和比较对象不明确

参考答案：
经济萧条不同于严重的经济衰退之处是其令人深感无能为力的恐惧—对未知的恐惧大到足以使消费者、商家和投资者退却和恐慌。