Patience means that you need spend some time to hold on one thing. But it did not care about the time is long and short, just need to complete or achieve the goals which in your inital mind.
Gamma_xue 发表于 2013-5-22 09:00
Patience means that you need spend some time to hold on one thing. But it did not care about the tim ...
首选是‘you need spend some time to hold on one thing’ need后面应该是要加一个to，虽然也有need do，但是此处用的话应该还是要加to的。然后是hold on one thing有这个用法么？咱们可以讨论下的说。
第二个句子：‘But it did not care about the time is long and short, ’不需要用过去时态，可用whether，‘just need to complete or achieve the goals which in your inital mind’缺少主语，inital mind我觉得无此用法
Obviously, to choose is to give up! "Second chace to live" seems to be another chance to live your liife to the utmost, but the uncertainty of the consequence might as well be a "Pandora's box".
Time will surpvise one's patience, for that a person's patience need a long time to be seen, from which we can see whether he has this precious quality or not。
It is, indeed, nobler by far to live as you would live under the eyes of some good man, always at your side; but nevertheless I am content if you only act, in whatever you do, as you would act if anyone at all were looking on;because solitude proments us to all kinds of evil.
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