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【考研1号】“作文修改”活动——【第二期“”道德滑坡现象】

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 楼主| 考研1号编辑部 发表于 14-10-10 14:14:38 | 只看该作者
tmsb 发表于 14-10-8 19:36
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kaoyanzhenxiang 发表于 14-10-14 10:30:41 | 只看该作者
2014年考研生的福音!很实用!真的是最好家教!
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聪明的小酥2 发表于 14-10-16 13:57:12 | 只看该作者
本帖最后由 聪明的小酥2 于 14-10-16 14:02 编辑

It is hardly difficult for us to figure out in the drawing given above that a person , leisurely and perky , is sitting on the seat while an older and a younger are standing there looking at the man who plays a temporary blind . It is a striking morning all to send us a significant message that personal morality has been declined in current society .
Why the phenomenon existed ? Several factors could weigh heavily for the depression of moralities , yet , suspend at the top of the list are the following causes . To begin with , there’s a large number of people who are not realizing moralities are significant to us on the contrary that they are selfness and heartless . Moreover , as the economic boom brings not merely material comfort but fast rhythm of daily life as well , modern citizens , especially those in metropolises , are facing more pressure so that people have no additional energy to care others .
It is hardly necessary for me to cite all the evidence of the revolutionary influence that personal morality gives rise to . To begin with , it is the symbol of personal cultivation and it can promote us get along with our friends . Apart form , personal morality is the foundation of building a harmonious society .
All analyses presented above convince people that morality is vital to us , thus , we should try our best to promote it in order to make our society colorful and harmonious .

希望有幸被批改。  最好能给个提示就本作文得分在什么范围内,心里好有个尺度,万分感谢!!!
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