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【考研1号】“作文修改”活动——【第二期“”道德滑坡现象】

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arthashao 发表于 13-10-19 18:02:12 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 arthashao 于 2013-10-19 18:04 编辑

      Nowadays, there seem to be a tendency of breaking moralities prevailing in our society. Just as the cartoon depicts, in the bus crowded with passengers, a “blind” person, who is actually healthy, is sitting on the seat which is provided for special populations, with an old man, a child and a pregnant woman aside and helpless.
      The progress of ethics is an indicator of the level of civilization in a society. Apparently, the situation in the picture above, to some extent, hinders this advance and may bring about a serious effect on our moral life. Such a moral degradation has been common in the modern life. Food businessmen can add illegal and toxic ingredients into food that we eat everyday in order to reduce the cost and gain more profits. Passersby no longer help the elder who falls on the way and waits someone to offer assistance, because they are afraid to be viewed as the accident makers. Were the trend to continue as it is, people would live under the shadow of deception and suspicion.
      It’s urgent for us to make efforts to bridge the ethical gap. First and foremost, morality-concerned curriculums should occur in the primary schools, which help children to cultivate conscience and goodness. In addition, those who are deaf to the ethics must be punished and accused in order to alarm people not to try to violate these holy regulations.

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arthashao 发表于 13-10-20 17:16:16 | 显示全部楼层
govycm 发表于 2013-10-20 10:10
我又来了,还是期待老师的批改。

    The picture features that a young man who acts as a blin ...

你是听何凯文的课的吧,看你的这两篇文章都好有他的风格啊。
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arthashao 发表于 13-10-20 20:55:40 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 arthashao 于 2013-11-6 13:56 编辑
govycm 发表于 2013-10-20 17:31
这都被发现了。不过我感觉跟着他还可以。考场上至少还是有写的。我之前的作文可不会写的。你听的谁 ...

他的课和王江涛的课我都听了,
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arthashao 发表于 13-10-22 15:55:03 | 显示全部楼层
govycm 发表于 2013-10-22 13:51
大家水平都差不多。各种错误

呵呵,我把他们两的风格都糅合起来了,还加了自己的独创的东西进去
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arthashao 发表于 13-10-22 22:16:28 | 显示全部楼层
miel 发表于 2013-10-22 17:27
弱弱的问一下,怎么可以听他们的作文课?···或者买他们的书比较好?初次考研,英语又差,求指点啊大神 ...

这个论坛的下载区就有各个机构的视频,至于书的话,我推荐何凯文的那本《考研英语写作高分策略》
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