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【考研1号】“作文修改”活动——【第二期“”道德滑坡现象】

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govycm 发表于 13-10-20 10:10:33 | 显示全部楼层
我又来了,还是期待老师的批改。

    The picture features that a young man who acts as a blind people sits at the seat which is prepared for the special group,among which are the elderly,pregnant women, children, and the like. There has been a heated discussion about the picture in the newspaper recently. The author’s real purpose is not the fact itself, but to lead us to find the hides behind the ice berg.
    The picture does reveal that lack of moral is not only harmful, but also damaging. The past decade has witnessed a huge development in economy, bringing some problems at the same time, with the above one is the foremost. What’s more, the public fail to attach due attention to the traditional moral value. Respecting the elderly and taking care of the young is our tradition virtues in our country. Unfortunately,some people neglect our traditional virtues , which is worse to our society.
    The situation being so serious, it is high time that we took effective measures to tackle this problem. In this issue, researchers, scholars, and experts are expected to work out up-to-date solution to moral lack. We can tack an education campaign to inform people the importance of traditional virtues. Only in reasonable, prosperous and healthy atmosphere can we hope to witness the ideal scene in which people can enjoy the life in a harmonious society.

沙发
govycm 发表于 13-10-20 12:51:51 | 显示全部楼层
重在参与。改正错误,继续努力
板凳
govycm 发表于 13-10-20 17:31:36 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 govycm 于 2013-10-23 23:50 编辑
arthashao 发表于 2013-10-20 17:16
你是听何凯文的课的吧,看你的这两篇文章都好有他的风格啊。

地板
govycm 发表于 13-10-22 13:51:03 | 显示全部楼层
子书十二 发表于 2013-10-21 08:15
我觉得不写不知道,一写吓一跳
感觉背了10篇文章,好像别人写的文也就是那个样子啊
自己一写,天啊,各种 ...

大家水平都差不多。各种错误
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govycm 发表于 13-10-22 16:18:32 | 显示全部楼层
arthashao 发表于 2013-10-22 15:55
呵呵,我把他们两的风格都糅合起来了,还加了自己的独创的东西进去

牛气
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govycm 发表于 13-10-22 23:53:15 | 显示全部楼层
五妖妖 发表于 2013-10-22 18:12
看出来了。。都是跟着何凯文的弟兄。。那一句development in the economy的万能句我也用了
我作文 ...

考场上能写出来,我就知足了
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govycm 发表于 13-10-23 15:39:17 | 显示全部楼层
水月龙灵 发表于 2013-10-23 14:23
小F有进步

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govycm 发表于 13-10-23 15:41:19 | 显示全部楼层
arthashao 发表于 2013-10-19 18:02
Nowadays, there seem to be a tendency of breaking moralities prevailing in our society. Just a ...

牛气,满分的赶脚啊
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govycm 发表于 13-10-23 23:53:53 | 显示全部楼层
考研1号编辑部 发表于 2013-10-23 17:12
今年的考研英语大纲相对去年的变化之一就是:试卷包括试题册和1张答题卡。以前说是两张答题卡,现在是合二 ...

谢谢老师了~
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